the 2 wonderful bro's

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Sep 14, 2013 6:02 PM #1083454
i made an art for my wonderful friend @theflamingkid
i really have respect for him cuz he is so kind and a good animator , so its time for me to make an art for us . XD
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Sep 14, 2013 6:20 PM #1083461
Can't you put in a little more effort in than line tool, blur, glow, bevel?
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Sep 14, 2013 6:21 PM #1083463
Sexy bro. Ain't got nothin negative to say. Good job
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Sep 14, 2013 6:22 PM #1083464
@charry well im sorry for that , im not a proffessional effects animator . i cant do those perfectly . so yeah
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Sep 14, 2013 6:27 PM #1083468
Quote from renZen
@charry well im sorry for that , im not a proffessional effects animator . i cant do those perfectly . so yeah


Well, you aren't animating, and I wasn't referring to the effects. Plus you have a sketch in your signature that hints you can do better than stickmen with bevel faces.
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Sep 14, 2013 6:35 PM #1083472
lol y taking it serious on a simple art ? i dont have to make it so serious dude , its not an art battle .
oh and my sig #credits to my sis
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Sep 14, 2013 11:01 PM #1083583
you can't be lazy with art! you have to take it serious! that leads to progression and increase in skill. seriousness is also needed from others in CnC so you know where you need to improve in and add on to.

as for my CnC: well Charry already said what i had in mind so that's been covered. but the torso on Theflamekid is extremely flat while everything else is beveled so you'd want to fix that.
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Sep 15, 2013 2:43 AM #1083671
Actually, even the bevels look kinda flat. Oh, well, not bad.
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Sep 15, 2013 6:47 AM #1083785
lol thanks for cnc guys . :3
maybe next time , i have to practice more . thats the best option .
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Sep 15, 2013 7:45 AM #1083802
Alright so yeah stock figures aren't really considered art. The bevels aren't correctly implemented either. On the upper arms you have them on the outside of the arm farthest away from the effect. That would imply that there is light behind the stick figures rather than in front of them.
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Sep 15, 2013 8:17 AM #1083809
^^^^^^ what arch said and you put the shading in the wrong places / the orange,blue should be closer to the fire,electricity not on the other side of the arm just saying but i like it
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Sep 15, 2013 8:21 AM #1083814
thanks anyway :3