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Sep 28, 2013 11:23 AM #1089538
Boys have swag, men have style, jellyfish have class.
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I wanted to try something I didn't quite get right a while back, and to be honest, I'm still not really happy with it... But as always, CnC and thoughts are much appreciated.
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Oct 4, 2013 12:06 AM #1091352
the hands and forearms are very thin and disproportionate to the whole entire body. the hands look like they're the hands of a five year old. the two don't compliment the drawing at all and makes it less desirable
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Oct 4, 2013 2:18 AM #1091416
It looks as though he was drenched in oil.
A bit too shiny bro.
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Oct 4, 2013 3:42 AM #1091430
I think the shine is alright, except the shoes. Especially the left one, from my point of view.
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Oct 10, 2013 7:54 AM #1091593
It's a silhouette?