please critique
Also try to critique on the background

Very choppy, bad easing and his arms are messed up. Don't make him shake them that idiotically.

Keep practicing.

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Very choppy, bad easing and his arms are messed up. Don't make him shake them that idiotically.

Keep practicing.

what she said.

yeah, hopefully you will improve.

It could use some work, try not to let the armss swing too high, reduce the toes because its disproportional. and make the stick move more realistically, he should go up and down, not to much but a bit, try to picture yourself walking, look at this tut http://www.stonesbucket.com/walking.php

Don't worry you'll get there.

thanks guys really appreciate the help. is the back ground ok?

Is that Pivot or Flash?? But anyways keep up the good work and take a look at a few tutorials.

ok

NEVER EVER save your FLASH files as GIF.

jup thats a gif. export as a swf and then upload it somewhere