Toby The MineCraft Addict

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Oct 31, 2013 1:59 PM #1100360

Toby The Minecraft Addict

Power:Spawn Minecraft Mobs except overpowered ones

StorySince 2 years ago, Toby was finding games, until he found a folder named .minecraft, he opened it and tried, he played it and until today, he was addict of Minecraft, because of his attraction to Minecraft, he made a potion of Minecraft and drank it, nothing changed. He didn't notice that he could use the command (e.g. /give) and he could spawn zombie, zombie pigman, villager and other mobs except that ones are so overpowered like Ghasts, Wither, Ender Dragon and Herobrine.

Age:19

Info:Toby is a boy that has big and huge attraction to Minecraft, he was addicted to MC 10 years ago.

Weight and Height:Weight: 90 pounds, Height: 6.2 feets

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Oct 31, 2013 2:11 PM #1100367

Normally video game-based wRHGs are discouraged, unless they're done well. This one? Not one of them, not a chance.

Where's the writing demonstration? There are a lot of missing items, and I sure can't write them up for you.

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Oct 31, 2013 2:21 PM #1100373

Sorry, but I'm sure there are still people who don't play minecraft on the forums. This character's writability depends on someone knowing minecraft really well.

There have been quite a few characters shot down for this reason, and you're not really making a very good case here. I'm going to have to vote against this character's implementation.

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Oct 31, 2013 2:30 PM #1100376

Blizzguy, your idea seems nice but you need to follow this template.

Anyway, to character proper.

Your character is very simple and only has one power, spawn mobs from minecraft. I'm a player of minecraft so I'd know what these creatures are but what of the rest that don't? If you'd like to push through with Toby, you'd need to give detailed descriptions of each mob, their powers and what they generally look like.

If you gave this guy some time, I'm sure it will be fun. If not, then simply scrap him and make someone else.