I finally was able to create an original character xD. I named her Lizzie.

And yeah. After I finished I noticed that the face was kinda fat x3.



cnc?

owo

I would more likely refer it as an OC if the whole body was there.

The nose and the mouth are little bit too much to the right making it look like the left side of the face is bigger.

The glaring issue for me is the eyes. They're unaligned. If you drew perfectly horizontal lines in they may look aligned ok, but that's where you've gone wrong. Note how her head is tilted at a slight angle, tilt the lines at the alignment of the head, the right (her left) eye is too high up. I'm assuming you use Sai, and note you can tilt the canvas with Sai, use that next time. Also the eyes are both perfectly facing forward despite the head isn't. the right eye should be flattened a little on the horizontal axis.
Also, the lighting and shading is lazily and very sloppily done, there are a lot of places with solid brush-work left in place and it looks very rushed.