This is a small story I will make for the nemesis clan
(I don’t know why I do things like this. So don’t ask why.)

“Welcome to the clan, Umbrella.” Jade said happily
“Thank you.” Umbrella answered also happily.
They all congratulated him until the ground shook violently.
They all turned around to see what happened and they saw Stefan standing there ominously.
“The heck are you?” Ibex asked
“What the… Stefan what the heck are you doing here. This is the RHG not wRHG.” Jade pointed out.
Stefan just stood there for awhile awkwardly then sat down into a prayer position.
“What’s he doing now?” Umbrella asks Jade
“I have no clue, I don’t even know why he is here.” Jade answers
Suddenly Stefan screamed and they all stared at him.
“The fuck…” Yun comments in astonishment

Suddenly two huge blue wings sprouts from Stefan’s back as he shouts in pain.
All the Nemesis members just stare at him.
Then Stefan’s eyes turn to blue flame.
“If I did not know any better, he wants to fight us.” Umbrella pointed out quickly
“Hmm… Lets get ready if he really wants to fight us so bad.” Jade said as she got out her fans.
The rest of the members got ready their weapons and abilities.
Stefan stood up again and stared at them.
They all stood there silently until Stefan’s body transformed into a light blue color.
“Come on then!” Ibex shouted as he charged towards Stefan
Stefan stood there without reacting until Ibex was about 5 meters away from him.
“Why is he not reacting?” Ibex thought to himself

Stefan then brought up his arm and then suddenly the arm started to stretch extremely fast towards Ibex.
It hit Ibex straight in the face and then Stefan’s second arm stretched forward and grabbed Ibex’s horns.
Ibex tried to make Stefan let go but Stefan just grabbed Ibex’s other horn and pulled him closer.
When Ibex was very close, Kursura started to aim for Stefan’s head and started to shoot from his blade.
Oryza started to shoot too and the rest of the clan got ready to charge straight to Stefan.
Stefan simply took out his sword and threw away Ibex and started to block the bullets.
Suddenly Ibex grabbed Stefan by the neck and slowly started to choke him.
Jade saw this and started to charge to Stefan to kill him.

But Stefan refused to be defeated that easily and flew up thanks to his wings.
He then elbowed Ibex in the stomach and pushed him off.
Then he grabbed Ibex by hugging him around the chest.
(Awwwwww so sweet <3… Just kidding XD )
Stefan then spun around and was aiming his head towards the ground.
He then pulled up Ibex so his head was higher than Stefan’s and Stefan started to very quickly fly downwards.
Umbrella understood what Stefan was doing and shot a bolt from his umbrella so it is in front of Stefan if he tries to land.
Stefan saw the bolt and let go of Ibex and evaded the bolt.

When Stefan landed he shouted again and his blue flame eyes went away also his wings.
“Looks like he is finished.” Yun said as Stefan slowly fell to the ground from exhaustion.
“Agreed.” Umbrella said as he walked towards Stefan
As Umbrella walked, Jade thought out loud, “Why would he want to fight us? He is not powerful enough and he is an wRHG.”
“Who knows… At least we got an exercise.” Kursura answered, when Yun was right next to Stefan.
“Oh I will give you more than an exercise!” Stefan shouted as he slowly got up.
“So you aren’t dead then? Well then die.” Umbrella said as he put his hands on Stefan’s head.

“NO!” Stefan shouted as he grabbed Umbrella’s hand and flailed his body around.
Stefan then threw Umbrella towards the rest of the clan.
Umbrella quickly got up from sliding on the floor.
“This might take a while.” Jade thought to herself
“Hmm… I thought his powers would be exhausted.” Oryza commented
“He really wants to beat us.” Ibex commented as he got ready to charge again.
“No don’t.” Jade said quickly as she got her spear out instead of her fans.

“Huh?” Umbrella said as Jade quickly ran towards Stefan with her spear aiming for his heart
Stefan also started to run but towards Jade with his fist out.
Stefan was running faster and faster until they were both very close.
Jade striked but missed and Stefan then punched Jade in the face breaking her nose.
Jade was enrage by this and stabbed Stefan right through the stomach.
Stefan shouted in pain but kicked Jade in the chest.
He then grabbed her hands and started to spin around.

He spun faster and faster until he let go thus sending Jade flying away and crashing into her base.
Jade then had a flashback of her past where she saw her father fighting for his family.
She hated this memory.
Jade quickly woke up with newfound rage and strength.
She then looked up and saw Stefan being restrained by her teammates.
But they had no avail; Stefan turned into wrath and simply threw them off.
He looked at Jade and started to run towards her with the full intent of killing her.
The exact moment before he did, he stopped and did not move.
He then coughed out blood and fell to the ground.
It was Umbrella who had killed Stefan.

“You okay?” Umbrella asked Jade as she walked over to Stefan
“Yes…” Jade said when she was right next to Stefan
“What was he trying to achieve?” Jade thought as she rolled Stefan over so his face showed.
Stefan had transformed back to his human form.
Jade then noticed that Stefan’s marks were glowing and that exact moment, Stefan grabbed Jade’s head and stared into her eyes.
“You will now understand.” Stefan whispered as he blacked out and fell down.
Jade also blacked out and fell to the ground.

“Are you okay?” Yun quickly shouted to Jade.
Meanwhile in Jades mind, she was seeing Stefan’s memory.
“What the…” Jade said as she walked through his memories
She walked for awhile until she found a very peculiar one.
She looked closer to this memory and saw herself.
“What the hell…” Jade whispered to herself as she went inside the memory.
Jade was transported right next to her father.

“Father!” Jade shouted happily as she hugged him.
But she just went right through him and then she understood that this was a memory, not her father.
She looked around and saw herself hiding in the escape route that she used to escape from the people that wanted the fans
Then a strange tall figure went inside the room that her father was in.
Then her father and him seemed to talk, but she could not understand.
Her father then took out a katana and striked the hooded figure.

The hooded figure simply stopped the sword and punched her father so hard his hand went through her fathers body.
“NO NO NO! Not this memory again!” Jade shouted as she covered her eyes.
The hooded figure took his hand out and took off his hood.
What Jade saw surprised her A LOT!

It was Stefan who had killed her father.
“WHAT! You did this to my father Stefan?” Jade shouted loudly
“Yes. It was me.” A voice said.
Jade turned around and saw Stefan.
He was in spirit form with half demon and half angel body.
“Why would you do this?” Jade asked angrily.
Stefan stood there for a while and then said sadly, “This was my memory during my foolish times. I had let Wrath influence everything we did.”

“But WHY?” Jade asked even angrier
“… Because he played a part in the murder of my family.” Stefan answered angrily
“What… why?” Jade asked astonished
“He could have saved them you know. He could have saved them.” Stefan answered with a sad tone as a tear dropped from his face.
“How could he have?” Jade asked concerned
“He was on the same street during my family murder. He heard them being killed but did NOTHING!” Stefan answered angrily with his fists clenched

“But…” Jade said as she thought.
“NO MORE!” Stefan said as he flicked Jade away.
This did so Jade woke up and saw her teammates tending to her wounds.
“Oh she is awake.” Umbrella said surprised.
“What happened?” Yun asked Jade
“… A revelation.” Jade answered.
“So he was one of them who did it? Who was the second and third one then?” Jade thought as she got herself up.

The end of part one. (I might continue this.)

uh... is it true ? . i never see the video

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The end of part one. (I might continue this.)

Continue writing Nemesis Fanfiction? Please do. I will literally read as many of these as you're willing to write.

I see you're going back to your roots. Remember when you made that story when you first came here?

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I see you're going back to your roots. Remember when you made that story when you first came here?

Its been such a long time since then, much has changed.

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uh... is it true ? . i never see the video

What do you mean video? I at the time was inspired by Umbrella's tryout animation for Nemesis.

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Continue writing Nemesis Fanfiction? Please do. I will literally read as many of these as you're willing to write.

This is old, I doubt I would ever bother.

Don't take this the wrong way, but this is a comedy right? It reads easier when you put laugh-tracks in the middle of every 2-3 lines.

At the time I made this I was trying to be serious with this.


Now I can't help myself from laughing, so yes, its a comedy.

Imagine your characters just pausing every once in awhile like a sitcom, and looking at the audience when they say their lines. It flows better that way.

That said, if you really wanna get better at this, you should try to not make the actions so stiff. Remove the intended effect above when you can.