Gin, The Mirror

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Nov 29, 2013 8:29 PM #1115748
Name: Gin

Abilities:
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Weaknesses:
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Personality: Gin carries himself with an air of noble authority, a portion of the hubris and self-obsession that his previous owners had possessed having bored into his own being. In spite of that same influence existing within his own makeshift heart, Gin finds pride to be a disgusting aspect of humanity, and he is likely to look less favorably on the prideful than on the humble. Or at least those who are not arrogant. Perhaps as an unconscious reaction to his hatred of arrogance, Gin feels a need to point out the flaws in that which another feels personal pride in. It is not his intent to put others down, so much as it is to steer them away from the haughty conceit he once witnessed day after day.

Gin, perhaps due to the nature of what he formed from, takes a particular joy in playing with the emotions of others. He knows what they want to hear, and what they don’t, and he is, as a consequence, particularly affecting on the moods of those he is in conversation with, while being simultaneously sensitive to them. To his enemies, his words cut like jagged pieces from his own self, while to those whom he holds as friends there is little more than praise and comforts, with the exception above related to their pride.

Appearance: Gin stands similarly to how he once did, as a tall mirror meant to fit in the whole of the body. Consequently, he is tall, tall enough to stand a head higher than the greater-than-average human being. All of his body has a certain smoothness to it, allowing reflections of all sorts, though because it is rather humanoid in appearance, the reflections can seem to be off.

When addressing someone directly, Gin generally reflects their own face back at them in a more perfect reflection. When he talks, the reflection moves its mouth for him, but Gin communicates his messages directly into the minds of the one he is addressing via telepathic ability. Generally, the voice that registers in the receiver’s head is their own voice.

Story: Gin began his existence as a mirror. A tall one, and every day his owner would stand before it, admiring himself, gloating to nobody about the perfection that was his physical form. Gin never knew what happened, then, but one day he had to be sold after a change in the winds of fortune and the man had to sell all his possessions to cover the costs of a series of lawsuits that hadn’t gone his way.

Gin’s next owner was much the same, but with a different face and body. Over time, Gin began to develop a hint of a sense of self-awareness, and with it came judgment. Gin was sold after the images reflected turned particularly unflattering, and the woman concluded that the piece was defective.

After that event, Gin was passed from owner to owner, each one seeing in his form the potential to admire themselves, and each one then having the mirror turn against them, revealing the uglier truths within their hearts and minds.

On the hundredth year of Gin’s existence, the budding awareness took full form, and Gin realized his own soul sought to escape this service. So he fashioned a body for himself, manipulating the glass surface of the mirror that was him and forming into a being. Shaped like the form he had come to know from 100 years of reflecting it back at them. Gin took the form of a human.

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ft and right, slowly sweeping, waiting for a reflection to appear that he remembered, the same reflection as the one that had been presented to him in pictorial format. A wolf-man and spirit hunter by the name of Walden. He had, somehow, survived a brutal tournament, and was recovering, then, in a hospital.

Walden, it seemed, had been changed by the tournament. He didn’t trust in the honor of his fellow man, and had paid for security to guard him during his stay. Even so, Gin found the mooks his target’s prey had purchased to be amusingly inadequate. As he approached each, he turned to face them, reflecting their faces back at them. And then their reflection spoke to them in words only they could hear. Words reassuring them of his intentions. That he was a guest, and an expected one at that. Yes, the one you had overheard being spoken of on the phone. Of course it’s me, and you know it is. Oh, to hell with your commander’s orders. He’s a fool, and you and I both know it.

Then there was the door, a much more daunting challenge. It stood, silent and unyielding, and Gin wondered if, perhaps, it would eventually grow to join him as an artifact spirit. Looking around, he found that such was unlikely. Everything, here, was much too modern. There were less of his kind every day, and the steady march of progress, he felt, was to blame.

Gin pressed on the door and, to his surprise, it opened. Perhaps this door was already on its way after all, and it was on his side. There, on a hospital bed, was the recovering man. Soon to be the dead man.

“What might you be?” The words made it apparent that Walden had no clue about Gin or his purpose for being in the room. Three steps, which was all it took for the towering mirror-man-construct to get close enough to look Walden directly in the eyes. There, reflected in the mirror’s face, Walden saw himself. Then he saw his reflection’s mouth move while his own mouth stayed shut, and as he watched the image of his mouth move, his head heard his own voice, speaking words that he did not conjure up.

Only two words were spoken: “Destiny calls.”

Walden, underneath his bed sheets, kept his pistol readied for moments such as this, and he raised it up, firing a shot directly into his own reflected face.

Gin reeled backwards from the impact, and time seemed to slow for a moment. Shards of glass flew through the air, in an elegant pattern. Somewhere, a nurse began to scream. The retort from the pistol reverberated in the room, and in a most unexpected fashion, the howl of wolves was heard.

Four of them pinned Gin against the wall opposite of Walden’s bed, and Gin observed a hundred different, fractured images of Walden sitting up in the bed, sliding his one leg over to the side. He was reloading his pistol, preparing for another shot, perhaps intending to finish what he had started. It wouldn’t work, of course. What was a bullet to Gin, who would not die, now that he finally lived?

More surprisingly to Walden, however, was the fact that his own wolves would not work, either, as the four turned away from Gin, releasing him, and suddenly they turned themselves onto Walden. The duelist’s eyes opened in shock as the pistol was knocked from his hands. The glass about the room came back to structure itself around his face, creating a bug-eyed Walden to be reflected back at him, and Gin knew how to finish the job that so many had failed to do.

Gin’s will was stronger than Walden’s, and so the man was restrained as Gin picked up the freshly-loaded pistol.

“Do you know what’s behind the glass of a mirror?” Walden heard Gin ask, his own voice sounding throughout his skull. The last word that he heard, then, before Gin pulled the trigger, was his own voice answering back: “Silver.”
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t, and Gin rode with him, hidden away in the reflection of the polished blade attached at the man’s side. For nearly a day, the man had been riding hard to reach the next waypoint, to switch horses, and then to repeat the process again, and for just as long, Gin had been at his side, waiting for the man to reach his eventual fate. Suddenly, the darkness of the sheathe was replaced by the blinding light of the sun reflecting across miles of sand. Here was the appointed place for he man in black to meet his fate, this burned out ruin that had once been an outpost. All of its inhabitants had abandoned it to the fire, and the fire had done what fire does best.

Distracted by the blaze, the man in black saw the glint of sunlight on metal too late, and in the next moment he was falling off of his horse, a longsword protruding from his chest. The man in black was dead before he hit the sand. From the reflection of the blade, Gin waited, then, for what he knew would be coming next. An assassins’ war had finally claimed its first casualty, and the second would be soon to follow. It was just a matter of waiting with the patience that only a thing that felt more like a stone than like any living creature could muster. After all, the assassin would need to confirm the identity of the man he had just slain before he could collect on the bounty he had been offered.

After a time, a shadow fell across the blade that Gin waited within. There the man stood, Gin expected there to be a smirk on his face, and when the man pulled his sword from the man in black’s chest, Gin caught a glimpse of just that. For a moment, Gin knew that he had been scene, but it lasted only a moment, and the man, who he knew was named Ahrim, turned his back.

“Just the sun playing tricks on me. He rode slowly, and this heat’s just causing a few hallucinations,” The words played out through Ahrim’s head, and he found himself nodding in agreement with his own voice. “Besides, I’m Ahrim. Master of the Blade. One of the few who can claim to have survived Walden’s fury. Soon to join the man I just turned away from.”

The voice in his head was his own, but suddenly, in spite of the desert heat, Ahrim felt a chill run down his spine. There was a terrifying presence, now, and as he slowly turned his head to look behind him, he saw the thing that had arrived from nowhere. Gin, the mirror, towered over Ahrim, blocking the sun from his vision. Ahrim's hand grasped the sword, still in the chest of his dead target, but the image reflected in the mirror made no such action. Instead, it sneered, watching the man.

"What do you think you're going to do with that?" The voice didn't come from the reflection, even as its mouth moved, but it echoed throughout Ahrim's skull. "I know what you're going to do with that, of course. You think that I'm like that man, there. Flesh and blood. Weak. Something that your blade can even damage. Even if you were right, even if I could be harmed by your blade, it would make no difference. You are weak. You are flesh and blood. You are like that man, there. I have given you enough time to make your peace."

The Mirror's body seemed to ripple, and what had once been a glass hand seemed to fracture within itself. The pieces did not fall, but rather they seemed to move themselves by magic to form a long blade, like that of Ahrim's own sword.

"So, then, it seems you have a tradition of sheathing your blade in the flesh of others. I shall continue your tradition."

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Ahrim couldn't find an opening to strike at. Every move that he made, Gin knew and preempted. The difference was that while Ahrim's arm began to burn, Gin's never slowed for even an instant. It was somewhere into the redirection of his own blade that Ahrim realized something about his opponent, that he seemed unwilling to take a direct hit. Of course, Ahrim rationalized, whatever it might b
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Nov 30, 2013 1:52 AM #1115864
Well, a changed wRHG! Rare to see people change their originals. Now, can I CnC?

The first is the character. I think it's slightly too weak, after you changed your original. Glasses are great idea, but steel can cut them like butter. Same case with other attacks that varies with other wRHGs. Your Mirror, Mirror ability balanced it, however. How about adding a weapon on him? And by the way, I think I wanted to add this ability (of course, it's your character, so if you don't want it, that's ok...)
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Then forward to the demo. I actually kind of like it,but the problem lays when you use verbs twice in a paragraph. It creates a sense of focus, I know, but that sounded a bit boring (at least to me), and there is some error here and there. But the vocabulary was a great piece of work, especially the "reverberated" word, I quite get a taste from it. And also the opening is a bit bland, yet the ending is pretty exquisite.

Overall, I put my fedora off for you sir, for having created an interesting wRHG for me to read.
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Nov 30, 2013 3:13 AM #1115945
Odd, I had thought Gin would be too strong, what with his turning the abilities of his opponent's against them; and Mirror's Vengeance, despite having the shortest description, is his ability to scale his combat towards the climax of a fight by taking his fallen body and utilizing it as a razor-deluge of cutting, disorienting edges that only gets stronger as he gets closer to being defeated. I guess his greatest weakness would be in the face of devastating blows that hit him at more than one point. Explosives would suck.

So as far as making him stronger goes, I'm thinking I would prefer the route of strengthening his body so that it requires more of an effort to break the pieces themselves, and possibly giving him an ability to be more evasive by hiding from attacks that would insta-gib him inside of other mirrors or mirror-like objects. Why that, specifically? Because I've got a mirror-themed name for it: Through the Looking Glass.

The only issue I really have with your ability suggestions are that I feel they start drawing attention away from Gin. My overall goal was not to make mirrors or glass the threat due to Gin, but rather to make the opponent the danger to themselves. That's why Mirror's Vengeance allows him to attack using his own body after it has been damaged, rather than just glass in general. Almost all of Gin's ability to attack comes, by one way or another, from his opponent. Or at least that was a lot of the intent.
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Nov 30, 2013 3:18 AM #1115951
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Odd, I had thought Gin would be too strong, what with his turning the abilities of his opponent's against them; and Mirror's Vengeance, despite having the shortest description, is his ability to scale his combat towards the climax of a fight by taking his fallen body and utilizing it as a razor-deluge of cutting, disorienting edges that only gets stronger as he gets closer to being defeated. I guess his greatest weakness would be in the face of devastating blows that hit him at more than one point. Explosives would suck.

So as far as making him stronger goes, I'm thinking I would prefer the route of strengthening his body so that it requires more of an effort to break the pieces themselves, and possibly giving him an ability to be more evasive by hiding from attacks that would insta-gib him inside of other mirrors or mirror-like objects. Why that, specifically? Because I've got a mirror-themed name for it: Through the Looking Glass.

The only issue I really have with your ability suggestions are that I feel they start drawing attention away from Gin. My overall goal was not to make mirrors or glass the threat due to Gin, but rather to make the opponent the danger to themselves. That's why Mirror's Vengeance allows him to attack using his own body after it has been damaged, rather than just glass in general. Almost all of Gin's ability to attack comes, by one way or another, from his opponent. Or at least that was a lot of the intent.

Oh, I see what your gimmick is now. Perhaps your intent is quite invisible, that I overlooked it. Anyway, I think the abilities itself a bit confusing, because he's basically an artifact, and playing opponent's weakness or emotions is quite hard for him. How can an artifact influence opponent's fear? Well, I don't know, but there must be a way to convey it to the readers.

Thinking again, this character is hard to write, so I suppose you must put a lot of work in this character. If that so, I wish you good luck at battling with this wRHG.
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Nov 30, 2013 3:24 AM #1115956
I think I may have misrepresented myself in the writing, if Gin is appearing to be something more like a literal artifact. Rather, he's intended to be something taken from Japanese mythology, the Tsukumogami. An "artifact spirit", an object that reaches its 100th year of existence and on that occasion becomes alive and self-aware. I've given Gin a soul, but in the spirit of the other one I made some time earlier, he's not truly alive, as in he doesn't require the things the living need. He has a consciousness, however.

Because I like taking ideas from other things, you could compare Gin to Tatara Kogasa, from the Touhou Project games. I mean, you could compare Gin a little bit, but he's a lot more of an original work than what I used to write. You could at least know what I'm trying to have Gin be.

I'll need to go back through and do some rewriting to make him more clear. Forgive me for writing at 3 in the morning, haha.

EDIT: Didn't make the other one, here, so that likely means nothing to you. Sorry, again.

EDIT2:

Changes have been made to Gin.

First, edits have been made to Magic Mirror, Mirror's Vengeance, Artificial Life, and A Soul Housed in Glass. The changes range from increased explanation to the nature of the ability and Gin's own way of being "alive" and conscious, to a buff in the overall durability of Gin, so that he won't just shatter if looked at the wrong way.

Second, Through the Looking Glass has been added, an evasion and infiltration ability that allows Gin to store himself in the reflection of a mirror. If the mirror is broken any further than it was when Gin first entered it, Gin will emerge shortly afterwards. Otherwise, Gin himself can emerge when such suits him. When using this ability, Gin can be found in the reflection, though he tends to make such a task more difficult than not, deliberately hiding himself inside the reflection.

Third, a typo has been fixed in his demo, in which Gin was pulling the answer, rather than the trigger.

Thanks for your time.
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Nov 30, 2013 8:03 AM #1116099
I like this wRHG.

I don't see anything overpowered from it since the danger from it comes from the opponent himself. So basically, it seems they are on par slightly. The abilities are fair for me and nothing comes as too powerful.