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The Forgotten Legion

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Dec 7, 2013 12:48 AM #1119552
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The year: 2266; a science vessel owned by a private company known as the I.P.A. (Investigation of Planetary Anomaly) goes unresponsive near an uncharted planet after a strange artifact found in the depths of the planet’s crust was brought aboard for research. A team of operatives from the ULMC (United Legions Marine Corps.) are sent in to investigate the disappearance of the crew, but find that the straightforward smash and grab operation would no longer be as simple as they thought.

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Dec 7, 2013 1:27 AM #1119571
This Forgotten Legion made with lot hardwork thats make this so epic :D
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Dec 7, 2013 4:40 AM #1119670
This animation is so epic!!!:D
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Dec 7, 2013 5:57 AM #1119712
I saw this first in the Upcoming works and progress and I'm like "This thing will not be finished" But look here!
Great job specked! Nice animation and I am impressed of you!
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Dec 7, 2013 9:30 AM #1119756
I was waiting for this to be Frontpaged by Stone/CrazyJay. Good to see this animation from the Community Animations to the FrontPage of StickPage.
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Dec 7, 2013 6:16 PM #1119930
Okay. Where do I start? Well, first off. It reminds me of Castle. Which I'm pretty sure it was inspired by.

The weapons could've been designed better. Still having the lineart on the guns and just coloring them in with gradients makes it look a bit half-assed. You probably could've gotten some cool weapons from some other members of the community if you asked them. Also the grunts, or soldiers, or whatever they were. It goes without saying that their helmets were carbon copies of the Caste solider with a larger visor is all. And lastly. The characters were half assed. They weren't fleshed out and I found it hard to really care about any of them. In the final scene where (I don't even remember his name) stays behind and gets killed. You see a sense of sadness come from Cosgriff. But I really didn't care. To me he was just another expendable solider, simply redesigning a character so they don't look the same as other ones doesn't make the character unique or have a deep meaning. I feel like we should've gotten some background on these characters to better know them. Something the Castle Series did flawlessly.

While the paragraph above may make it seem like I didn't like the animation. It's quite the contrary. I thought it was amazing. Great animation, lots of suspense and even some horror now and then. The backgrounds were stylized and dynamic. And overall it looked good. (But the bitmap spaceship really irritated me)

In the end I think you took a step in the wrong direction when you decided to just thrust these characters into their situation with no development whatsoever. Deep and fleshed-out stories are driven by the characters. And I can't see the next few episodes going well unless you throw in some flashbacks or some scene where the character goes into exposition.

Congrats on the release Specked! Loved it, truly did. It's fantastic for what it is. I'm eagerly waiting to see more!
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Dec 7, 2013 8:15 PM #1119960
Highly cinematic and entertaining.

Me gusta.
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Dec 7, 2013 10:53 PM #1120004
Wow that was awesome i didnt knew that it was that long
assuming that this is a series im really looking foreward to the next parts
im also wondering what the reaction would be from the creators of castle repercussion
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Dec 8, 2013 5:48 PM #1120522
Very entertaining. Very well done overall. Had some gripes with it, but those are comparable to the gripes I'd have with an AAA hollywood movie.
I got DOOM vibes the entire time which is a good thing because i loved that movie.

Awesome job on this, I look forward to more
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Dec 8, 2013 5:59 PM #1120530
I kept watching the glowing squares of the preloader even after it had finished loading.
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Dec 10, 2013 1:48 PM #1121409
this was pretty awesome specked , waiting for episode 2 :D
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Dec 18, 2013 1:57 PM #1125871
The animation was just... DANG! what the hell! it was so good, i gave it a rate of 20/10. too bad it was a little bit, well, short. but it's rockin hard. kinda reminds me of Oscar Johanson's Castle series.
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Dec 18, 2013 11:11 PM #1126196
Epic and scary man! LUVED IT xD
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Jul 6, 2014 1:26 AM #1215625
All we are waiting the second part :D
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