Yun Photography Reel 2013

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Yun
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Dec 9, 2013 5:13 PM #1120959
Usual Workstation (Click to Show)

Bus Routine (Click to Show)

Justin and SA (Click to Show)

Lone Sprout (Click to Show)

Behind Our Barriers (Click to Show)

Runed Lines (Click to Show)

Blown Squares (Click to Show)

In Every Mask, Behind Everyone (Click to Show)


A Boy and His Identity Is One Thing (Click to Show)


(C) Lucas D. Yun 2013

Comments and Critique are appreciated!
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Dec 9, 2013 7:36 PM #1120998
Not bad, over all the boxhead one lol.
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Dec 14, 2013 11:47 PM #1123892
Sweet stuff Yun, I'm love photography as well and here's a couple nitpicky things from me

For A Boy and His Identity Is One Thing, don't use unnecessary filters since I felt that it would still be a really powerful picture without those little things everywhere (unless there's a messages I'm missing)

Blown Squares actually really needed those filters otherwise it wouldn't be, er, Blown Squares I guess XD

I liked Lone Sprout but I think the sprout was a little blurry compared to the middle of the gravel (lol wut). I would personally make the sprout super focused and the rest of the image blurred (kind of like Behind Our Barriers).

The spacing on Runed Lines felt a little awkward to me. Probably because it was spaced in fourths rather in thirds. I think there's some sort of thing where photos in thirds are best. Correct me if I'm wrong. It's still a pretty sweet photo though.

I loved In Every Mask, Behind Everyone. However, I probably would've shown more of the torso area to show more of the human aspect of the person wearing the mask. Otherwise, great photo.

All in all, pretty great photos. Keep at it!
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Dec 15, 2013 1:19 AM #1123939
Personally I find some of these pretty dull. You should try trying more dynamic shots and angles.