Flash Practice

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Dec 25, 2013 6:43 AM #1129701
I want to improve in flash, so i made this animation :D
Its 18 fps btw :P

http://vianbni.deviantart.com/art/Flash-Practice-1-422080936
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Dec 25, 2013 10:54 PM #1130113
Ok...:
-The stick himself is wobbly, try to smooth them out/ get smooth lines for his body.
-It looks like his forward arm punches twice in a row, was that what you were going for?
-There is some sliding going on in the footwork
-His arms, legs, and body all get re-sized during the animation, try to keep it consistent...
Hope this helps :)
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Dec 25, 2013 10:59 PM #1130114
Quote from vianbni
I want to improve in flash, so i made this animation :D
Its 18 fps btw :P

http://vianbni.deviantart.com/art/Flash-Practice-1-422080936


It's actually wobbly, needs more force. It looks stiff for me. You should make the fps higher. Like 24fps above because the animation is slow................
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Dec 28, 2013 10:50 AM #1131548
thanks for all the cnc guys :D
i really apreciate it :)
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Dec 28, 2013 10:51 AM #1131550
too short o_O