1st time doing a serious drawing in flash
Took roughly 2 days:
http://www.filz.us/view/7f58425f-0c9/
edit: process: http://www.filz.us/view/0ae9e925-da8/
2nd version: http://www.filz.us/view/bd33549d-93e/
Resh does art.
Started by: Resh | Replies: 4 | Views: 884
Jan 1, 2014 1:37 PM #1134058
Jan 1, 2014 5:08 PM #1134147
Resh that looks awesome!! You shoukd've added a BG to contrast the colors of the girl it kinda gets confused with the BG. But I think everything ekse it fine owo.
Jan 2, 2014 1:11 AM #1134328
I like the idea of that little making of swf. Pretty neat.
The problems for me are the elbow, it doesn't look like it's resting in her palm, just sitting above it, plus her hand is at a right angle, which looks very off. I want to you rest your elbow onto your arm, and notice how your fingers curve around your elbow, and don't make a flat 90o hinge, I think the neck is too fat, and the right arm cuts through the shoulder because you drew the line that separates them way too high up, and that arm itself is too thin compared to the rest of her body, and the left forearm cuts to the front of her body, as the shoulder is sitting behind her, it doesn't seem to make much sense.
Your anatomy is the main issue, but I still like the drawing.
The problems for me are the elbow, it doesn't look like it's resting in her palm, just sitting above it, plus her hand is at a right angle, which looks very off. I want to you rest your elbow onto your arm, and notice how your fingers curve around your elbow, and don't make a flat 90o hinge, I think the neck is too fat, and the right arm cuts through the shoulder because you drew the line that separates them way too high up, and that arm itself is too thin compared to the rest of her body, and the left forearm cuts to the front of her body, as the shoulder is sitting behind her, it doesn't seem to make much sense.
Your anatomy is the main issue, but I still like the drawing.
Jan 2, 2014 1:50 AM #1134349
This looks good.
Good job!
Good job!
Jan 2, 2014 8:40 PM #1134802