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Jan 20, 2014 9:19 PM #1144463
Image it's still a work in progress but this is a Majicross story anim of a girl who modeled herself after Ashige being banished from Ashige's world and meeting with Majicross. It's also an my best easing so far
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Jan 20, 2014 10:29 PM #1144487
THE HEK ARE THOSE BUMPS ON ASHI'S BODY?
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Jan 20, 2014 10:33 PM #1144489
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THE HEK ARE THOSE BUMPS ON ASHI'S BODY?


Can you make better boobies?
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Jan 21, 2014 2:56 AM #1144619
the animation is still choppy and stiff your still having problems with easing and those boobs lol
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Jan 21, 2014 3:01 AM #1144624
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the animation is still choppy and stiff your still having problems with easing and those boobs lol


The teets are PERFECT and the easing is almost there
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Jan 21, 2014 3:10 AM #1144626
My opinion so don't get riled, but boobs don't really work well on a plain stick body, especially when physics is applied. I recommend adjustment to a more feminine silhouette? I did recall some truly girly stks back in the day.
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Jan 21, 2014 3:28 AM #1144637
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My opinion so don't get riled, but boobs don't really work well on a plain stick body, especially when physics is applied. I recommend adjustment to a more feminine silhouette? I did recall some truly girly stks back in the day.
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Why I tried so hard to make it perfect(1 word per smash) why why why×hower many times you view this gif)
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Jan 21, 2014 3:32 AM #1144640
Don't take it too badly, I probably should have worded it better. But at least I know you're trying.
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Jan 21, 2014 3:38 AM #1144642
you must have a bad definition of easing easing is speeding up and slowing down and you lack flow because of the stiffness because other parts of the body are not moving at all thus giving it the choppy appearance i would also make your other sticks move as well because they dont just stand there and not move at all if you want to use speed you must use easing after because its hard to understand whats going on i hardly was that exclamation mark above all those sicks but you are improving :)
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Jan 21, 2014 3:44 AM #1144647
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you must have a bad definition of easing easing is speeding up and slowing down and you lack flow because of the stiffness because other parts of the body are not moving at all thus giving it the choppy appearance i would also make your other sticks move as well because they dont just stand there and not move at all if you want to use speed you must use easing after because its hard to understand whats going on i hardly was that exclamation mark above all those sicks but you are improving :)


I know I know I saw the other guy give this lecture on another thread after I made this thread but thanks
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Don't take it too badly, I probably should have worded it better. But at least I know you're trying.


But I wanted everyone to be like "this is a pretty cool anim Rokon" or even better "Rokon this is awesome!!!"
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Jan 21, 2014 4:27 AM #1144657
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I know I know I saw the other guy give this lecture on another thread after I made this thread but thanks


But I wanted everyone to be like "this is a pretty cool anim Rokon" or even better "Rokon this is awesome!!!"

there is a difference between an actually good animation and people just sucking up we are telling you the truth to help you get better so when you are amazing it will be the truth people are saying :)
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Jan 22, 2014 12:47 AM #1144971
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Can you make better boobies?


Yes I can. But you did a good job. BTW, I had a problem of putting speed lines everywhere cuz it helps to keep out parts of animations. Try not to use them too much, as it makes people look inexperienced.
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Jan 22, 2014 12:49 AM #1144972
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Yes I can.


Do it then
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Jan 22, 2014 2:30 AM #1145009
mkay.
done.
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Jan 22, 2014 3:16 AM #1145026
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mkay.
done.


Where are they

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But you did a good job. BTW, I had a problem of putting speed lines everywhere cuz it helps to keep out parts of animations. Try not to use them too much, as it makes people look inexperienced.


I hardly used speed lines in this anim but I know what ya mean and though it may look lazy or whatever but it was made to look like that on purpose