Pixel art: astronaut

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Jan 26, 2014 7:21 PM #1147163
i'd like some CC on this pls Image
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Jan 26, 2014 7:28 PM #1147167
Overall, it's some pretty impressive pixel art. However, the pole on the flag is on the wrong side, and at the alien ship crash (bonus point for using Space Invaders), I can't tell if that's a crater or a shadow or what. To me it just looks like the ground decided to change colors.
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Jan 26, 2014 7:40 PM #1147171
Hey, thanks, at least somone knows how do give criticsm, not just: It looks good, or this is shit. Ill take it to heart.And at the alien ship crash, it was supposed to be piles of dust that are different colours with the lighting. and i realised just after i posted this that the flag was on the wrong side of the pole xD
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Jan 27, 2014 12:46 AM #1147284
I like pixel art a lot, I like how simple it is.
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Jan 27, 2014 10:54 AM #1147474
thanks, i usually suckk at drawing but with pixel art, i can do stuff :)
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Jan 27, 2014 12:34 PM #1147542
Looks interesting. I like the idea. But the picture`s simple, so there`s not much to critique.
The flag looks too outlined comparing to other objects on the picture. And too much contrast for my taste.
If I were you, I`d try to add more details, to work with the 'dust' or to make the ground on the first plan a bit more light.
Anyway, good work.
P.S. Make something more likeable for your signature, I know you are able to do it ^_^
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Jan 27, 2014 2:14 PM #1147635
though i did not add much detail in purpose, i did it because there's not much life in space. :)
Thanks for the CC