Tryout WIP

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Jan 28, 2014 6:50 AM #1148112
So, I've recently started making a tryout for an awesome new clan. I really want to make this animation the best it can be. I've been animating for a few months now, and I've gotten a grasp of Flash.

Some serious critiquing would be really helpful!

http://www.filz.us/view/e76af19b-e2c/
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Jan 28, 2014 8:32 PM #1148499
Hard to give any feedback since the animation is so short still but you could make the legs of your sticks little bit longer because now they look little bit awkward.