My drawing of my character Zack Stick, anime version

Dude that's awesome

The shading is terrible, the proportions are off (especially on the arms), the jacket fades too much into the background, and honestly? It doesn't look very anime. This could use some serious work overall, right now it just looks like a lame cartoon. And I mean the newer cartoons, not the classics like Looney Toons. Looney Toons would run circles around this piece, artistically speaking.

He look Badass! I like this dude. I so wish I can freaking draw!!!!!! How long it take you to make this? That thunder or electricity is boss. Whole thing is boss!

Quote from Azure Kite

The shading is terrible, the proportions are off (especially on the arms), the jacket fades too much into the background, and honestly? It doesn't look very anime. This could use some serious work overall, right now it just looks like a lame cartoon. And I mean the newer cartoons, not the classics like Looney Toons. Looney Toons would run circles around this piece, artistically speaking.

Sums up what I wanted to say. But now for a speck of my own uniqueness:

-The neck looks too fat from that angle. It's probably because the way you positioned his body doesn't correspond with your anatomy "skills".

-On the hand, why is only one finger shaded? You need to look up some references or tuts on how to shade properly, and where to apply it.

-The face seems almost TOO angular, even in anime. It shouldn't be that angular if you're using a 3/4 view.

-Work on it.. Like badly. And look up more refs for anime-style art if you want to continue it~

Now, that aside, it isn't horrible; just needs quite a bit of work. Keep it up

Quote from Azure Kite

The shading is terrible, the proportions are off (especially on the arms), the jacket fades too much into the background, and honestly? It doesn't look very anime. This could use some serious work overall, right now it just looks like a lame cartoon. And I mean the newer cartoons, not the classics like Looney Toons. Looney Toons would run circles around this piece, artistically speaking.

sums up what i wanted to say(most of it)

Quote from Cyriztz

He look Badass! I like this dude. I so wish I can freaking draw!!!!!! How long it take you to make this? That thunder or electricity is boss. Whole thing is boss!

please stop saying something is awesome when its not

CnC:
like stated before the shading is awful, color contrast is horrible, body parts are disproportionate and well the main thing that bother me is the color contrast. its soo hard to see. the only thing i like is the Zack logo. the sword looks like you just draw without care and you drew a fist over it.

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please stop saying something is awesome when its not

In my opinion it is awesome, hell i'm not a drawer so I can't critique his work.. But my two eyes happen to like what it sees. He didn't just throw up something shi**y. So why can't I point out things I like?

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In my opinion it is awesome, hell i'm not a drawer so I can't critique his work.. But my two eyes happen to like what it sees. He didn't just throw up something shi**y. So why can't I point out things I like?

its not like i'm saying you can't what i'm saying is that it might not be awesome at all. i didn't say it was shitty i just don't like it. no one is ripping you from your expression of opinion

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In my opinion it is awesome, hell i'm not a drawer so I can't critique his work.. But my two eyes happen to like what it sees. He didn't just throw up something shi**y. So why can't I point out things I like?

I think little Rawrzie was just saying that there are quite a few individuals who don't really critique art, and instead sit there "fascinated" while the other members of the community stand aside and either groan, help, or all of the above.

She was simply stating that you may enjoy the art, but go beyond the means of just "ooh"-ing and "aah"-ing at every little piece that wriggles its way though the community art section; actually be helpful WHILE admiring/staring disgustedly at it.

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I think little Rawrzie was just saying that there are quite a few individuals who don't really critique art, and instead sit there "fascinated" while the other members of the community stand aside and either groan, help, or all of the above.

She was simply stating that you may enjoy the art, but go beyond the means of just "ooh"-ing and "aah"-ing at every little piece that wriggles its way though the community art section; actually be helpful WHILE admiring/staring disgustedly at it.

thank you Chamel :3
i had no idea how to sum up the words i wanted to say but you made it so easier for me. thank you Chamel <3

I will reply to all comments, good first who found incredible was your honest opinion, as I know the shadows are poorly made, it was because sometimes I'm too busy I get a few hours on the computer and did this drawing in just 3 hours I did very rushed, did not have time to review the design to fix etc.. When I buy a notebook for me I will have more time to create better animations and better designs, then this is it I can do a much better design that I only sometimes I rushed and did not realize the errors.

sorry my bad english I'm still learning




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