Movement practice

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Jan 31, 2014 6:51 PM #1150541
Finally, I have time to animate, so I decided to practice more to the bigger projects...and here are the results:

http://www.filz.us/view/8fa5a631-7e1/
http://www.filz.us/view/fbc015ad-a81/

Enjoy and CnC would be great! :)
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Jan 31, 2014 8:10 PM #1150565
They both seemed really smooth to me.. Idk my laptop laggss soo bad but they seem really smooth I like your style that you have there. Also the second anim with the stick blocking the moves a little more force could be added to those hits. it didn't seem like they were giving much force.
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Feb 1, 2014 4:01 AM #1150699
:) I remember seeing your animations when I first came to SP! Especially your Portal Collab Part. I like these man! I pretty much agree with KidDarkness about the force with your attacks, although I liked the blocking part he blocked those attacks like a boss! Fast pace is awesome but some of your attacks were hard to see. Like the first one. That last kick, not sure if it connected, if it wasn't any sound I wouldn't have known he kicked him. On the second one towards the ending was too fast, slow certain things down maybe, he pushed him I assume. Other than that, freaking 2 thumbs up from me!

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Feb 1, 2014 4:25 AM #1150710
wow smooth and it had flow nice just a bit of head re sizing that's all
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Feb 1, 2014 3:33 PM #1151008
Thanks guys!
Yeah, I absolutely agree with the force thing and in the first one after I drawed it, I thought it would be too fast and hard to see and as I noticed, it is :) The other one, I felt the same about the speed, but my purpose was to make an anim with a very small amount of double frames, so I didn't want to change it, but I accept your opinion and I agree with all of those things, so I'll try to watch out for that in the next ones. Oh yeah and the head resizing...well...that just comes with the style I think, because I can't draw the circles to look the same :)

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Feb 3, 2014 8:41 AM #1152043
There's no double framing, but it's smooth. I like the second one :)
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Feb 3, 2014 8:50 AM #1152049
Quote from latranchedepain
There's no double framing, but it's smooth. I like the second one :)

tbh fbf is better than double framing and it comes out more smooth
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Feb 3, 2014 10:15 AM #1152080
It's cool, I like it! But I think the first stick stands up way too fast after being thrown against a wall.
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Feb 3, 2014 9:22 PM #1152338
Thanks!
There is double framing in the second one, but not too much :) And yeah, that stand up is way too fast, but I made the yellow guy's movements first, so I had to time it to that...I know that was a really bad idea...
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Feb 3, 2014 9:29 PM #1152339
True Martial arts >3
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