i made a fan art of my favorite mmo Vindictus awhile ago and now i have had requests from people that play it to draw their charter. so here they are let me know what ya all think :)
this is a "Vella" class

this is also a "Vella"

this is a "Evie" class

another "Vella"

another "Evie"

You seem to have some very serious issues with anatomy and proportion, especially facial features. To note a few:

The fourth woman has very wide shoulders, leading to her arms being seemingly detached, and also has very narrow hips. Following normal proportions the hips should approximately the same width as the shoulders. The last one has the same issue as well.

Arm lengths are different in most or all drawings

Wrong heights where the breasts start, and incorrect placement of the collarbones.

In addition, facial anatomy is warped in many places, especially the noses and lips. Head shapes aren't too stellar, either.


I would suggest you look up basic human proportion, and the Loomis method for drawing heads and mapping positions for facial features. It doesn't hurt to look at what you're drawing from time to time either; differing limb lengths are an easily made mistake, but are also easy to avoid by occasionally checking.

thats a bit of a downer :/ thought these looks alright. but thanks for your input. will looks for some tuts later

"Looks alright" is really subject to whatever standards you are using. I'm only here to tell you that you can improve, and which places seem to require the most attention at the moment. The best encouragement should be from the following improvement that you make, not from how good your work is or whether it met your expectations.

To add to that, here's a demonstration of the loomis method for drawing heads. There are other videos by the same person detailing other facial features, which you may want to look at as well.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1EPNYWeEf1U

This one details female proportion. You should be able to find other videos regarding anatomy from the same artist too.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eiKcI49l5uc

thank you for these. they seem vary helpful. will be trying those out next time i do a drawing.