I drew this when I got bored on my class. I would like some cnc. So, here it is
http://hamidharahap.deviantart.com/art/My-RHG-full-body-pic-432199729
Drent fullbody
Started by: S21-P | Replies: 3 | Views: 540
Feb 6, 2014 2:26 PM #1154230
Feb 6, 2014 10:14 PM #1154376
very nice bruh! :D I like it ;)
I think I should make my rhg's fullbody too... when I will have one :D
I think I should make my rhg's fullbody too... when I will have one :D
Feb 9, 2014 8:24 PM #1155614
Nice draw. The character's design is creative. I especially like the design of the hair, the highlight in his hair is pretty cool. I see that you went with a style similar to Bryan Lee O'Malley's style for Scott Pilgrim.
I have a few problems with the picture though. The left and right side of your character's face aren't symmetrical, so it makes the face look a bit awkward. Next time you draw on lined paper, try and use the lines to keep the face symmetrical. It seems like there is a gust of wind making the top shirt flutter in the wind in your drawing. The same effect should have been applied to the pants as well. Also, the pants seem rather boxy.
The sword that is on your character's back looks rather rushed and abstract.
All in all, its not a bad picture. Keep on drawing and never give up ;)
I have a few problems with the picture though. The left and right side of your character's face aren't symmetrical, so it makes the face look a bit awkward. Next time you draw on lined paper, try and use the lines to keep the face symmetrical. It seems like there is a gust of wind making the top shirt flutter in the wind in your drawing. The same effect should have been applied to the pants as well. Also, the pants seem rather boxy.
The sword that is on your character's back looks rather rushed and abstract.
All in all, its not a bad picture. Keep on drawing and never give up ;)
Feb 9, 2014 11:04 PM #1155664
Well let's see....
-Your anatomy is... bad. The arms should be lengthened a bit, close to about mid-thigh or maybe just a tad lower. Then there's the head. Why is it so large? It looks as if he would topple over from being top-heavy. And the hands. Look up references for how to draw them in that particular style
-Your clothing is necessarily bad, but it definitely needs work. I see no folds in the cloth anywhere, and it gives it a bland, flat look.
-The weapon you drew on his back is crude and clearly rushed. Work on it.
-The face isn't really asymmetrical, but it isn't proportioned properly. Learn how and where to place the eyes, nose, mouth, in the corresponding areas.
-Your shading is crap, just complete crap. All you did was take your pretty little pencil and sketch a few lines down the sides to make it darker. You didn't even take into account a light source, or even how shadows dance around a figure. For Pete's sake (Sorry Pete) you didn't even attempt the hair.
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Look into some good references/tutorials for anatomy, and DEFINITELY for things that follow:
-Shading
-Folds in clothes
-Hair
-Face shape/construction
-Art
-Your anatomy is... bad. The arms should be lengthened a bit, close to about mid-thigh or maybe just a tad lower. Then there's the head. Why is it so large? It looks as if he would topple over from being top-heavy. And the hands. Look up references for how to draw them in that particular style
-Your clothing is necessarily bad, but it definitely needs work. I see no folds in the cloth anywhere, and it gives it a bland, flat look.
-The weapon you drew on his back is crude and clearly rushed. Work on it.
-The face isn't really asymmetrical, but it isn't proportioned properly. Learn how and where to place the eyes, nose, mouth, in the corresponding areas.
-Your shading is crap, just complete crap. All you did was take your pretty little pencil and sketch a few lines down the sides to make it darker. You didn't even take into account a light source, or even how shadows dance around a figure. For Pete's sake (Sorry Pete) you didn't even attempt the hair.
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Look into some good references/tutorials for anatomy, and DEFINITELY for things that follow:
-Shading
-Folds in clothes
-Hair
-Face shape/construction
-Art