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Started by: Speeeedo | Replies: 16 | Views: 1,910
Feb 18, 2014 1:28 AM #1160496
Living in NY gives you time stopping powers. Yeaaaaah
Feb 18, 2014 2:20 AM #1160532
Quote from Azure KiteOk, so, a few criticisms:
1. He's blue. Others have said it, but I'd like for this to be established, especially since you say his color is red.
2. He got time powers by growing up in New York? This is a bit questionable at best.
3. His powers say he can stop time and/or fly. Does this mean that at times only one of his abilities is available to him? That's kind of hard to tell.
4. His weaknesses are holes and big swords. I don't quite understand how that makes sense in any way. You'll have to go into further detail on that.
5. In the demo, his powers include energy blasts and summoning a big sword. Which is his weakness. Which makes me wonder ever more how his powers and weaknesses work.
Well long story short, I'm not trying to bang on anyone, but he clearly made this very poorly. I honestly have little to nothing against this RHG other than the fact it's incredibly simple.
Quote from HydraRicoLiving in NY gives you time stopping powers. Yeaaaaah
Ikr. So legit, I wanna go to New York. :P
Wait. I've already been there! :D