Lance vs Amanda

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Feb 12, 2014 5:40 AM #1157038
Maybe Gre wasn't a good anim to put up when I just got back but I made this a few days ago.Image If I did this right RWBY fans should be able to know what is going on.
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Feb 12, 2014 5:59 AM #1157041
I bet money someone is gonna say something about that run.
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Feb 12, 2014 6:31 AM #1157043
use more frames and more movement other wise you may as well show a slide show its just pose after pose after pose i will make an animation to describe what your doing wrong.
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Feb 12, 2014 9:04 PM #1157385
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I made this a few days ago.


I think this is the problem. It should read "I've been making this for the past few weeks". There's nothing intrinsically wrong with making longer animations but you need to spend proportionately more time on them. Every joint needs to move in every frame.
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Feb 13, 2014 12:35 AM #1157468
What series or whatev is this? And I noticed that u usually do ur animations with lots of detail, but you do your movements like stop-motion pictures. Maybe you can put more frames of movements between your main movements? Don't forget, Pivot has no tweens.
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Feb 13, 2014 3:59 AM #1157566
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What series or whatev is this? And I noticed that u usually do ur animations with lots of detail, but you do your movements like stop-motion pictures. Maybe you can put more frames of movements between your main movements? Don't forget, Pivot has no tweens.


The series is RWBY but I gender-flipped the characters.