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Charlotte "Charlie" Hyshards [Small Update Published!] [More updates coming soon!]

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Feb 15, 2014 12:37 PM #1158982
NOTE!!! Before reading, please note that I had lost 30-40% of my English writing skills after a long hiatus (one year) in wRHG and studying Filipino language. Thank you

NOTE!!! #2 Please if you see any mistakes or anything that looks like a mistake for you, then reply here and tell me what you saw. And I allow criticism, well I always prefer harsh criticism rather than kind criticism but I do accept both. So feel free to comment and criticize.

NAME
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OCCUPATIONS
Occupations (Click to Show)


SPECIALITY
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LANGUAGE
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apanese words because he went to Tokyo.[/spoiler]

RELIGION
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NICKNAMES
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"Smartass" Charlie - named by his classmates
"The Guy Who Loves Sardines A Lot" - named by his classmates
"Super Sardines" - named by his classmates
Swordsman Charlie - created by himself
Charlie - created by himself
Charles - created by himself
Shardy - created by himself[/spoiler]

FAVORITE QUOTE
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ration" -Thomas Alva Edison[/spoiler]

PERSONALITY
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n if he knows he is going to lose, he always do his best. Charlie is also a bright person, he had learned a lot of scientific and history stuffs. When in a good mood, he always love telling jokes and laughing. He never gets angry really fast. When someone accidentally punches him, he will easily forgive them without giving any harm, he is a happy-go-lucky man. When it goes into fighting, he is always in his max potential. He is very aggressive and, before a fight or when there is time, always plan a strategy/tactic on how to stop the person trying to kill/attack him. Sometimes he is talkative.

Another thing is that he never kills even if the person is trying to kill him, he will just try to encourage the person to do his best just to keep the person happy. Charlie appreciates science and history a lot, his dream is to become a successful scientist.

Charlotte is not the type of a person who loves to speak dirty words, but will say bad words non-stop when on aggressive mode. Charlie also acts like a child, sometimes people would thought that he has a "child's brain" rather than an "adult's brain". [/spoiler]

APPEARANCE
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that he sees on his closet. He has a long straight brown hair that reaches his shoulders, a blue eyes, pale skin, and small dots of hairs located on his chin (maybe, a mustache?). He is a bit muscular.[/spoiler]

STORY
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ed by his mother Alice Evelton and father Roland Hyshards. When he finished studying, Charlie trained as a swordsman in The Way of a Swordsman of the United States of America (TWSUSA) located in Ohio where his dad taught him how to use a sword (later, he trained with the Hafleim Swords). As he reach 16 and was about to finish as a student of TWSUSA, his father gave him the Dual Hafleim Sword. The sword is made of combined metals such as iridium, titanium, osmium, tungsten, lutetium and diamond. It was said that an old blacksmith named J.H. Jones (Joseph Hare Jones) forged it in the year of 1987 during the "Earthwar" that took place in Earth. (see Earthwar in the story section for more information).

When Charlie reached 17, he went to Japan to train as a swordsman again in The Blade Academy located in Tokyo. His teacher, Yasuke Hadari, a known Japanese blacksmith and former swordsman who fights against the Aethofahns, improved the Hafleim Sword by re-forging the Hafleim Swords to improve its sharpness but this time: Yasuke added another improvement by putting a blazing fire around the sword (see "Weapon Information" section for more information about the Hafleim Sword). After 6 months of training in The Blade Academy in Japan, he retired and went to Louiseville, Kentucky and lived in Louiseville Hotel.[/spoiler]
Story #2: The Earthwar Era (Click to Show)

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hen he first joined the Pyrokinesis Academy. It basically looks like a school with its own room, each room has its own pyrokinesis teacher. He attended the Pyrokinesis Academy on December 22, 2014 (that was before he met Aiba Kannagi). He was taught by a professional fire manipulator and retired professional magician, Robert Chuck. Charlie said that Robert Chuck is extremely strict and would punch him if he don't follow his teachings and rules very well. From December 22 to 29, he was taught by Robert on how to manipulate fire with hands. From December 30 to January 8, he was taught on how to manipulate fire with both of his swords. Robert said "Charlie is a smart guy, he learned pyrokinesis very fast and that's unbelievable. My other students learned pyrokinesis and spent their days being taught by me for thirty to fifty days. But Charlie, I think he just learned pyrokinesis for like sixteen or seventeen days. I like him, and he's a nice guy."[/i][/spoiler]

DEMO
DEMO #1: Featuring Aiba, a wRHG created by Ken_Rou (Click to Show)


WEAPON INFORMATION
Dual Hafleim Swords (Click to Show)


TRIVIAS
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  • When Charlie was training in TWSUSA for the first time with the Dual Hafleim Swords, he suddenly cut his left knee's skin but not really deep, he needed to cover it with bandage because it keeps bleeding.
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    Feb 15, 2014 12:40 PM #1158986
    Awwwwww yeah!
    It up man!
    Congrats on finally making it

    Anyway an interesting character
    I wish you luck here in the wRHG
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    Feb 15, 2014 2:48 PM #1159062
    Quote from devi
    Awwwwww yeah!
    It up man!
    Congrats on finally making it

    Anyway an interesting character
    I wish you luck here in the wRHG


    Thanks, took me like one month to create this wRHG lmao.
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    Feb 15, 2014 2:51 PM #1159067
    Quote from Lethal5
    Thanks, took me like one month to create this wRHG lmao.


    Well you know how I am feeling right now
    I've been working on my wRHG for a month now @_@
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    Feb 15, 2014 3:03 PM #1159074
    It was pretty cool that you put in my character for one of your stories. It got a good chuckle out of me.
    Anyway, looking forward to fighting you soon!
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    Feb 15, 2014 3:04 PM #1159076
    Put me on your hitlist ye fother mucker
    The second I make my new wRHG, I'm coming for you
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    Feb 15, 2014 3:12 PM #1159082
    Quote from Ken_Rou
    It was pretty cool that you put in my character for one of your stories. It got a good chuckle out of me.
    Anyway, looking forward to fighting you soon!


    Haha. Looking forward in fighting you soon too! c:

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    Put me on your hitlist ye fother mucker
    The second I make my new wRHG, I'm coming for you


    fak yewr ye beatch. lol anyways, sure I'll add you. c:
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    Feb 15, 2014 3:13 PM #1159083
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    fak yewr ye beatch. lol anyways, sure I'll add you. c:


    u wot m8? I 8 your sandvich too. lol anyway. Yeah I'll also look forward to it.
    Now just to finish the god dang character

    Prepare your ass sonny cause I'mma kill you for your sins against the divines
    Prepare to be purged
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    Feb 21, 2014 2:03 PM #1162291
    Very small thread update is here! Just go to the "updates" section to see the improvements.

    The "refer to 'some information about stuffs'" section is going to be here soon, I just need to study or else my mom will kick my ass like goddess. More updates is coming soon!
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    Feb 21, 2014 6:32 PM #1162372
    I'm sorry, but I must've missed some sort of memo here. Like a writing conference that I clearly did not attend or something or maybe I just didn't read enough origin stories, but why is Devi and Lethal both's characters set in the future? Like... I know most of our stuff isn't real and/or sci-fi, but having a specific year like:

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    In the year 2015, Roland gave the Hafleim Swords to Charlie as a gift


    And:

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    Current Year: Year 2031


    Like... Where is this coming from? I'm not criticizing this, but I have been writing for times today as the world is today around, I don't know, 2014. So... What's going on guys? I've been avoiding adding years to my stories because not all of us really have an origin story well agree on, and it is hard to adapt one's character to a certain day and age. So... Just need to know where this conference and/or debate is?
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    Mar 5, 2014 2:12 PM #1170913
    added "beast mode", basically just a normal ability where he attacks recklessly without non-stop and will become very brutal.

    finished the very short story on who taught him pyrokinesis and where he learned it.

    added one sentence on his personality section.
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