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Troy & Joshua [Night & Illness]

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Feb 19, 2014 8:17 AM #1161122
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Theme Song
Prelude (Black)
By Dirtyphonics

Troy (Click to Show)


Joshua (Click to Show)


About how did they meet up (Click to Show)


Weakness
'Soul Link'
Both have their souls connected, if they separe, they die.
If one of those dies, his souls will get in the other's body

If Darkness Dies, Poison will get corrupted by the Darkness, causing him the instant death.
If Poison dies, Darkness will get infected by the poison, cuasing him a slowly death.

Status
Available

[DEMO]

Clan
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Points
0/0/0

Hitlist
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Bastian "Mental" Leal - ©2014

P.D: Special Thanks to Ahdo for all the help of this RHG.
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Feb 19, 2014 8:18 AM #1161123
A pretty cool RHG I must say

Good luck matey


EDIT: THAT. F*CKING. DEMO. SO. BADASS.
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Feb 19, 2014 8:38 AM #1161128
Awesome RHG very detailed just edit the unfinished demo :D
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Feb 19, 2014 8:39 AM #1161129
Quote from Jaywi
Awesome RHG very detailed


If thats detailed then shadow is mind blowing.

anyway like I said pretty badass demo man
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Feb 19, 2014 10:42 AM #1161172
Nice RHG but please finish the demo.
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Feb 19, 2014 10:49 AM #1161176
Very nice I must say.
I'll check the demo later cuz I'm on my phone now.
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Feb 19, 2014 11:03 AM #1161184
Pretty cool rhg, love the Green one looks original.
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Feb 19, 2014 11:34 AM #1161192
sooo metal, there's quite a few grammatical errors in your stories. you should constantly revisit them. idk why, but that's just how it works. it's not just you man. like, each time i fixed my stories i'll be like smiles and giggles and horny, but each time i revisit it i keep going "brain, are you sure i didn't wrote this 15 years ago?". also, troy kinda lacks motivation to fused with joshua. i mean he seems like some isolated guy too, it doesn't seem like it makes sense for him to want to share his live with another man... unless...
and if you're keeping it a 'mystery' you should at least hint it. less is sometimes good, but too much less becomes void. regarding joshua's story, the expose of his hate for his parent was spontaneous. try exposing it, like, in the beginning. you can maybe throw in a couple of shildhood stuff too.

speaking of joshua. i don't see you much on dispatch anymore.
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Feb 19, 2014 12:20 PM #1161213
Just.... Simple and Nice! :D
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Feb 19, 2014 3:17 PM #1161320
noice RHG metal! goodluck with future battles!
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Feb 19, 2014 9:00 PM #1161417
Quote from Maroon
sooo metal, there's quite a few grammatical errors in your stories. you should constantly revisit them. idk why, but that's just how it works. it's not just you man. like, each time i fixed my stories i'll be like smiles and giggles and horny, but each time i revisit it i keep going "brain, are you sure i didn't wrote this 15 years ago?". also, troy kinda lacks motivation to fused with joshua. i mean he seems like some isolated guy too, it doesn't seem like it makes sense for him to want to share his live with another man... unless...
and if you're keeping it a 'mystery' you should at least hint it. less is sometimes good, but too much less becomes void. regarding joshua's story, the expose of his hate for his parent was spontaneous. try exposing it, like, in the beginning. you can maybe throw in a couple of shildhood stuff too.

speaking of joshua. i don't see you much on dispatch anymore.


Plot Twist: My brain was all Mindfucked because i was makign the story all the night, making it so fast to go to sleep.

Also you need me at #Dispatch also?
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Feb 19, 2014 10:49 PM #1161451
Metal2, you still have your RHG, Danny, here. Right now you have two RHG threads. You want me to lock it, or bin it?
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Feb 19, 2014 11:29 PM #1161459
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Metal2, you still have your RHG, Danny, here. Right now you have two RHG threads. You want me to lock it, or bin it?


Bin Danny's one please, also did Rosie binned the Derek's one? I dont know so thats why.
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Feb 19, 2014 11:39 PM #1161464
What are the colors?
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Feb 19, 2014 11:45 PM #1161467
Quote from Metal2
Bin Danny's one please, also did Rosie binned the Derek's one? I dont know so thats why.


Locked, but somehow can't bin it. Maybe it was already binned idk.
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