My first RHG battle.Win by Forfeit
the period was 4 weeks, however the deadline was yesterday, but I have not had time to post, and Acheron did not send his battle so far, so decide to send my battle won. :D :D

http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/1295/

Nice going IsaacX. Grats on winning ya first RHG. Linkin Park is one of my favorite bands out there!
If you want a critique for this animation. I'll edit this.

Helpful Critique: The blood splatter, one thing I learnt is that if your going to draw blood it would make for good effect if you let the blood hit the ground to stain up the surface, instead of doing the mid-air particle vanish technique(sometimes it work). Was kind of hard to follow the fight it was quite choppy but that just might be my poor connection :') if not, try adding some in between framing to smooth somethings out. All around it was a nice battle, and I can't wait to see more of Zack.

hey, not bad, happy winning, although the foot placements to me seems to move about a bit. But you're improving!

Quote from Cyriztz

Nice going IsaacX. Grats on winning ya first RHG. Linkin Park is one of my favorite bands out there!
If you want a critique for this animation. I'll edit this.

Thanks :D , I'm also a fan of Linkin Park my band favorite , and about animation You may criticize what you want :D



My RHG:http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?78208-Zack
My Deviart:http://isaacx1977.deviantart.com/
My facebook:https://www.facebook.com/isaac.sales.50

Quote from Cyriztz

Nice going IsaacX. Grats on winning ya first RHG. Linkin Park is one of my favorite bands out there!
If you want a critique for this animation. I'll edit this.

Helpful Critique: The blood splatter, one thing I learnt is that if your going to draw blood it would make for good effect if you let the blood hit the ground to stain up the surface, instead of doing the mid-air particle vanish technique(sometimes it work). Was kind of hard to follow the fight it was quite choppy but that just might be my poor connection :') if not, try adding some in between framing to smooth somethings out. All around it was a nice battle, and I can't wait to see more of Zack.

Good review, and I agree with you, I did this battle in just one day before the deadline, because I'm a little busy, but I did in a hurry and did not realize some mistakes, I do not really like this battle. I plan on my next RHG I'll do better with better angles and well done, I'm trying to improve, so that's it.
Thanks for the review. :D :D




My RHG:http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?78208-Zack
My Deviart:http://isaacx1977.deviantart.com/
My facebook:https://www.facebook.com/isaac.sales.50

really nice!