Gun Shootout test

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Feb 24, 2014 1:40 PM #1164332
I thought im gonna make a little short gun shootout.
its ment to test it out so its really short and the animations of the black dude arn't really good.
what do you think?:confused:

http://sta.sh/0zoqbgw1j0j
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Feb 24, 2014 3:03 PM #1164354
I like it. To make it better you could add a glow to the flare from the gunshot. Also, the legs on the stickfigures seem weird for some reason. I think the back leg doesn't have a knee or the knee isn't in the right place. Otherwise, the recoil was good and so were the particles.
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Feb 24, 2014 3:14 PM #1164360
Ahh thx dude. Glow to the flare is a really good idea and yeah i misplaced the leg indeed.
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Feb 26, 2014 1:37 AM #1165196
A few tips:

The legs are usually longer than the body
Try to ease out reactions
The gunshot from the enemy stick was way too inaccurate :p

Not bad, though.
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Mar 1, 2014 4:06 PM #1167434
Nice. I like the flow. only, as what naft and flamr had said, the legs were longer than the body so it looked kinda awkward. Even though, still pretty cool!