I'm doing my 1st part for the Sword Collab and wow, i'm finding it kinda hard to animate at 24 FPS...

I'm proud of it, but if the FPS was slower you could more then likely see better whats going on... I tryed the V-Cam, damn it made my animation look hella good. (to me anyways)

I would like C&C and if I should continue. (Note:This is my 5th flash ever*)

looks good ;)
but it´s kinda short. pls make it longer.

Of course, I got alot more to do. I just wanted to know, does slower FPS work better for me? (look at my sig it goes to another topic I posted with slower FPS.)

no stay at 24 fps. learn to make animations smooth. i know it´s not easy, even for a beginner. I have flash since 3-4 months, so im a newbie to, but i think my animations are ok :D

Meh, you're right. I can get used to 24 FPS just gotta add hell more frames. ._.

Stay with 24fps, seeing as most collabs require that to be your fps.

Decent background for a starter, just finish more of it so you can actually get criticism and stuff.

I like my BG also, thanks for the C@C i'll work on it more tommorow

Too shaky, and anoying background

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Too shaky, and anoying background

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That's why I like lower FPS
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Zoomed in BG doesn't look as good zoomed out... sadly T.T...

Im not being rude or anything but that background is pretty terrible even if it was zoomed out :[.

Try to spend more time on it and look at some tutorials because those yellow sunrays just look bad and take away from the animation.

As for the animation dont try to do sword movements until you got the basics down. it was kinda choppy and movements wernt realistic.

Just keep practicing :3

Either your V-cam doesnt match the working area, or you can't draw. it looks awkward. and annoying.

Way too hard to tell whats going on, and the background is just fleh.

Layer problem with the swords. look closely.

I say scince your first anime, it was verty good, again, work on the background, the rays should be thick, and the sky 1 colour, unless your doing gradient colours. I like the movement, VCAM a bit too shakey, overall better, your improving rapidly.

To many stops, also the bg is kinda distracting. And the moves are way to fast, add more easing or just inbetween, take more frames to do the movements.