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Cyphus Bi-weekly

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Mar 9, 2014 4:19 AM #1172920
http://g0mute.deviantart.com/art/Weekly-1-439180697

got a bit of some brutal stuff in it. tried to add a bit of humor in at the end; tell me what you think.
Like always, CnC is welcome.


(this was for my clan's bi weekly animation)
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Mar 9, 2014 9:02 AM #1173014
very nice, you improve fast and your work with angles is good, atleast better than what i can do.
I like the boom headshot sound at the end, brings me back to the old days of watching purepwnage series. Wasn't sure at first if he hit his head or missed it at the end, but rewatching it made me realise that he hit him due to the punch sound, you should make the force from the punch more noticable. :)
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Mar 9, 2014 1:09 PM #1173104
well, I just tried to make it funny, so I made it look like his punch didn't do shit to the guy. idk

thanks mate
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Mar 9, 2014 3:53 PM #1173199
The head break seemed so familiar...

I like most of the animation but i could spot some problems
The run was funny since the stick had a necks. Necks are ugly.
The faces wee choppy and lazily animated.
The end was just O_o
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Mar 9, 2014 5:22 PM #1173228
thanks for the CnC Apple, (the neck part was with the white guy's run cycle, right?)
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