The Teleporter (for Jaywi)

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Mar 16, 2014 8:08 AM #1176083
The Teleporter

http://rhgninmars.deviantart.com/art/The-Teleporter-440708130?ga_submit_new=10%253A1394957080

For Jaywi

Some Suggestions Please

(P.S. I edited this on Flash 8)
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Mar 16, 2014 3:47 PM #1176216
Suggestions? How about your reconsider the whole thing since fluidity was completely absent in the whole thing?
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Mar 17, 2014 9:20 AM #1176438
How bout I tell you this thing was rushed
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Mar 20, 2014 11:52 AM #1177896
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How bout I tell you this thing was rushed

How about you tell me how the fuck does that matter. Rushed or not you need to stay away form long animations and stick with simple fucking tests. You lack all basics. Read zed's tutorial and follow the exercises.
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Mar 22, 2014 1:52 PM #1178744
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How about you tell me how the fuck does that matter. Rushed or not you need to stay away form long animations and stick with simple fucking tests. You lack all basics. Read zed's tutorial and follow the exercises.


If you know who I am, Im just trying to impress my freind Jaywi and practice pivot,Plus I dont use Pivot I use Flash 8.(except just tested Pivot and I miss making crappy animations with it.)
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Mar 24, 2014 6:07 AM #1179412
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If you know who I am, Im just trying to impress my freind Jaywi and practice pivot,Plus I dont use Pivot I use Flash 8.(except just tested Pivot and I miss making crappy animations with it.)
I don't give fuck who you are but all I hear are excuses. Do you want Constructive Criticism or not, this wasn't impressive.
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Mar 24, 2014 7:26 AM #1179425
Forget it mizu, clearly we are dealing with "a noob that practices alot"

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actually that clan was binned im gonna change dis after I im in. Im a newbie.


I updated the Tryout into Zeta style, so am I in?
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All you really did was add outlines to it. You said you're a newbie, so you should try to get better at animating before jumping to join a clan. Just practice, it helps a lot.
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What if told you sir, I practice a lot.
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Then keep practicing. That's what i do, and i'm pretty sure that's what everyone does.