http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/1414/

You are welcome to give cnc.

Very nice!
smooth and everything!
tips:
I think the yells were a little odd, they didn't quite fit it.
secondly, the last punch thing that apaleth did was a little confusing. I'm not entirely sure what he did.
Very nice though!

Thank you bro, made the punch more noticable and removed 2 of the yells.

like it in general, sweet choreography in general

Ey, baby i liek it, very muchos grande. Since your style i take it is bigger legs and a small spine. that is all fine and dandy in my world but if not done right it makes it look stiff. I would like to see more "bounce" in your style. Squash and stretch I think would really add to that kinda build of a stick. Specially with your smoothness. Keep up the good stuff, love to SEA more. haha sea...