Unrust/Practice

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Mar 31, 2014 1:37 AM #1181888
Pretty much just unrusting I'll do longer shit later.
http://filz.us/2cjG
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Mar 31, 2014 10:44 PM #1182141
Dude, you're back! Welcome back ElkiousAnims into SP. Long time no see man. :D

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Your animation is still good as always, and you've improved a bit. Can't wait to see more from you man.:D
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Mar 31, 2014 10:49 PM #1182142
Quote from Castro
Dude, you're back! Welcome back ElkiousAnims into SP. Long time no see man. :D

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Your animation is still good as always, and you've improved a bit. Can't wait to see more from you man.:D


CASTRO!!!!
What's up yo! I'm actually making some fight scenes if you want me to livestream ill hook it up. :D
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Mar 31, 2014 11:11 PM #1182144
Uhhh..
Good job? I don't know how to criticise, sorry..
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Mar 31, 2014 11:32 PM #1182150
Quote from X-Core
Uhhh..
Good job? I don't know how to criticise, sorry..


Nah yo it's kool, thanks for the comment. :)
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Apr 1, 2014 12:28 AM #1182171
Ok then, kind elk

During this frame V
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I recommend bending the stick back more. It would acts as anticipation for the next attack. I like the trails you used but the attacks were weak as hell. Try to follow through some more after some attacks and just rotate the stick more. The red line showed where the stick should of been.

I think the stick should of bounced some more after falling on the ground. The stick just fell down like a brick.

During this frame V
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I think that the stick stopped moving for a while and it ruined the flow. The stick should of kept moving forward.

The attacking was kinda stopp and go. After the attack the stick should of snapped back. This will emphasize force and look pretty and stuff.
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Apr 1, 2014 1:50 AM #1182215
Quote from Atomicapple
Ok then, kind elk

During this frame V
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I recommend bending the stick back more. It would acts as anticipation for the next attack. I like the trails you used but the attacks were weak as hell. Try to follow through some more after some attacks and just rotate the stick more. The red line showed where the stick should of been.

I think the stick should of bounced some more after falling on the ground. The stick just fell down like a brick.

During this frame V
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I think that the stick stopped moving for a while and it ruined the flow. The stick should of kept moving forward.

The attacking was kinda stopp and go. After the attack the stick should of snapped back. This will emphasize force and look pretty and stuff.


Yea I saw that when I finished, thanks for the CnC. :D
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Apr 2, 2014 12:47 AM #1182568
ELK! long time no see, nice to see ur back!

The anims is nice, but the stick is super stiff during the anim. sure it was smooth but it had no flow into another move. he pretty much stood still on the first combo.
the second combo was covered by atomicapple up there^^
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Apr 3, 2014 6:05 PM #1183391
Quote from EpicJay13
ELK! long time no see, nice to see ur back!

The anims is nice, but the stick is super stiff during the anim. sure it was smooth but it had no flow into another move. he pretty much stood still on the first combo.
the second combo was covered by atomicapple up there^^

Lol, HEY MANNG!
Thanks for the CnC