m4a1 Gunshot practise

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Apr 4, 2014 9:20 AM #1183738
here's me practising shooting for my GTL Part
http://laxus900.deviantart.com/art/Gunshot-practise-1-444867724
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Apr 4, 2014 11:12 AM #1183765
Pretty stiff, needs more easing. His legs are not doing anything, the force from the gun would make the entire body react. The right arm became smaller at the end and popped over the gun when he started to shoot, you should put more work into the smoke since it disappears way too fast, it also appeared late, or so i believe. I also think the muzzleflash is wrong, it looks like a star. Look up the net for muzzleflash. The placement of his left hand is wrong, holding a big weapon like that would make his hand be under the m4a1 and the fingers stick up, instead of the entire hand.
Overall, not bad, just keep it up. I hope i could somehow help.
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Apr 4, 2014 12:08 PM #1183786
Quote from Krubb
Pretty stiff, needs more easing. His legs are not doing anything, the force from the gun would make the entire body react. The right arm became smaller at the end and popped over the gun when he started to shoot, you should put more work into the smoke since it disappears way too fast, it also appeared late, or so i believe. I also think the muzzleflash is wrong, it looks like a star. Look up the net for muzzleflash. The placement of his left hand is wrong, holding a big weapon like that would make his hand be under the m4a1 and the fingers stick up, instead of the entire hand.
Overall, not bad, just keep it up. I hope i could somehow help.


wow, seems like you know what you are talking about. Thank you very much I will try to keep all of this in mind. :)