http://sta.sh/01i25daw7nib

Cnc will be appreciated

main things would be just that the kunai looks like it barely contributed to the fight at all, like you just put it there for no reason at all. Also blueish guy is kicking black guy, his arms were just flailing in odd ways. also blur mans run side to side just looked kinda floaty, nice reactions though

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main things would be just that the kunai looks like it barely contributed to the fight at all, like you just put it there for no reason at all. Also blueish guy is kicking black guy, his arms were just flailing in odd ways. also blur mans run side to side just looked kinda floaty, nice reactions though

I see, i guess i should add effects and make it more clear that the kunais are the ones teleporting him.
The thing with his arms was on purpose, but i can see that it looks way too silly and odd now that you pointed it out.
I'll try and figure something out, many thanks.

krubb. STOP IMPROVING. You're getting too damn good...
anyways, the arms are kinda everywhere, like amf said. also, when the black guy was rolling of of the wall on the right, apaleth was hitting him but there wasn't really a reaction from the black guy. He just kept rolling, which made it look a bit odd.
good job and keep it up m8

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krubb. STOP IMPROVING. You're getting too damn good...
anyways, the arms are kinda everywhere, like amf said. also, when the black guy was rolling of of the wall on the right, apaleth was hitting him but there wasn't really a reaction from the black guy. He just kept rolling, which made it look a bit odd.
good job and keep it up m8

There was reaction from the black guy when he rolled, i believe that the vcam moving at the same time makes it hard to notice. I will note that.
Thanks by the way, you made me realise something important that i forgot a long time ago, that the viewers won't see what i see. ( 一_一)