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CnC for improvements? Please excuse my no face parts i'm still working on how to draw it, not an artist so its not that easy.
Clan Weekly1
Started by: Cyriztz | Replies: 5 | Views: 522
Apr 17, 2014 4:22 AM #1187468
Apr 17, 2014 7:53 AM #1187492
Dat loading screen. XD I thought you're so bad at animating. Haha.
The moves didn't go smoothly. I mean, I notice the kicking move goes slower and it should be.
Maybe you could be a little creative on the background. So, I give you 3.5/5
The moves didn't go smoothly. I mean, I notice the kicking move goes slower and it should be.
Maybe you could be a little creative on the background. So, I give you 3.5/5
Apr 17, 2014 7:45 PM #1187672
Quote from UltraDeltaThe moves didn't go smoothly. I mean, I notice the kicking move goes slower and it should be.
Maybe you could be a little creative on the background. So, I give you 3.5/5
not sure what you meant by not smoothly.. like is it choppy or just didn't flow right? Any tips?? I use a crap load of in between and try to ease in and out of things. "kicking move goes slower and it should be" is that good or bad? sorry for not understanding. bg is better than white canvas, but i'll try to be more creative with them. thanks
Apr 17, 2014 9:19 PM #1187686
Quote from Cyriztznot sure what you meant by not smoothly.. like is it choppy or just didn't flow right? Any tips??
Yeah, it was kinda choppy. But only the kicking part. The double kick part. But the other moves are fine.
I should say something about the effect. But it's great.
May 25, 2014 6:23 PM #1198932
Not bad. Work on the wind effect at the end though. I liked the finisher. Literally just blew a hole into a rock, nevermind the red guy that got disintegrated lol.
May 25, 2014 8:10 PM #1198949
Yeah everything was pretty wobbily. I suggest that instead of inbetweening everything, you just doubleframe it. inbetweening things actually takes a little bit experience because you don't always just draw your dude perfectly inbetween the next and previous frame cus there's a lil more to it blahblah. you can worry about that ish when you get better but till then you should just double frame. all your hits looked like they could use more force too, probably delete the frame right before the kick so it looks alot faster and therefore stronger. And you did speed lines wrong. all the lines have to be pointing to a specific point on your screen, like: 
it'll make it looks alot nicer, keep it up
it'll make it looks alot nicer, keep it up