I am practising smoke again... sooo CnC ?

http://laxus900.deviantart.com/art/Smoke-Particle-Practise-448120668

Try double framing it and making it fade with the alpha bar. It looks good though. :)

Not bad. I see you watched one of phil's video guides.
I think the bit that needs the most work is the particles at the end. The way they "fade out" is really jumpish. Not very smooth at all. The most choppy bit is at the top, but you can see it with all the particles. You need to think about how they would actually flow. They would go fast, and then slow down and grow smaller.
I like the shape of it though.
Keep practicing

Quote from ILikePurple

Try double framing it and making it fade with the alpha bar. It looks good though. :)

Right! I forgot about it XD Thanks btw :)

@Spectre : Thanks! yea I watched it some time ago :) aand yesh I will try to improve