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Mimic

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Apr 27, 2014 5:53 PM #1190629
Hi guys this is one of my first flash animations so be nice.
http://www.fastswf.com/X6Lej8E
CnC is greatly appreciated!
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Apr 27, 2014 8:09 PM #1190652
One of your first? That's awesome. :D But maybe turn the soothing down?
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Apr 28, 2014 6:42 AM #1190776
^debatable, lol. Looks really good so far
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Apr 28, 2014 3:05 PM #1190883
Lol nice job mayne. Poses are pretty nice, overall it's just working on the basics. Anticipation, easing, SnStretch, follow-through. Though the attacks are decent they don't flow at all. It's almost seems like there is a frame where he is still after the attack which makes it look stop n go-ish. Try to work on easing into the next attack, for example, after that first kick you start easing, go ahead and start winding up the punch, all at the same time trying to make sure he keeps going ---> because of the momentum. Just keep pumpin out practices and you'll get the hang of it. Also watch the arms, maybe try animating them one at a time to make sure they dont just teleport all over the
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May 5, 2014 8:12 AM #1192428
Lol this CAN NOT be yout first animation...
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May 5, 2014 5:15 PM #1192492
For a first animation, I must say it is awsome. Better than Terkoiz's first RHG battle.
As Jazzon says, it's hard to believe that it's your first animation. The stickmen are moving properly, even tho some movements aren't right, you have a good trail technique and I see you used v-cam, it's making it a little bit more cooler.
Tell me, what is the frame rate ?
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May 5, 2014 10:37 PM #1192542
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Lol this CAN NOT be yout first animation...


I said this was one of my first flash animations, I didn't say anything about it being my first animation.
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May 6, 2014 12:18 AM #1192562
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I said this was one of my first flash animations, I didn't say anything about it being my first animation.


Pretty sure that's "something" about it being your first. A better term would be to say you're a beginner/newbie or somethin like that. It is still a good animation to be what I'm guessing is of few attempts at animating? Idk, good job man, just keep practicing lol.
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May 6, 2014 8:41 AM #1192636
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I said this was one of my first flash animations, I didn't say anything about it being my first animation.

It kinda goes without saying... Anyway you can only take this as a compliment... My first anims were terrible. At first, I couldn't animate a simple stick, didn't know a thing about sfx or V-cam and couldn't begin to understand blury trail... I still don't use it cuz it complicates things for me too much, but you... If this is one of your first animations, you have a bright animating future son...
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May 7, 2014 7:01 PM #1193085
teachme 2d pliss.
ur amazing,. just the stick construction at the end was a bit off and the-*looks at your avatar*
it was nice. :)