EDIT: FORGOT TO DO THE HAND lol my bad

practice again :S

http://irian11.deviantart.com/art/Lookout-Value-2-451046184?ga_submit_new=10%253A1398838962

I tried a more interesting pose from the last one,and attempted to make it more realistic
(left foot was on purpose, didn't turn out so good)

Whoa. That's some fantastic shiz dude.

This is actually really good, I love the hair. I see a lot of Bluefly in there. The way her legs connect to the torso, her neck(oh man that neck lol), and her nose could definitely use some work though.

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I see a lot of Bluefly in there.

i was waiting for someone to notice that lol :p
I see what you mean

The pose it's self is nice, its fluid and doesn't feel stiff. But the lines are horrible and so if the shading/coloring it kind of looks like you decided to not draw the feet correctly and the head is a bit too big. You should look up some color/shading tutorials, good ones.

Head size feels fine. Shading is smudgy, face feels like it's drawn flat. I don't like the jaw and certainly not the misplaced and small ear. Hair also gives her an alienlike head shape.

Right leg looks too long, and the angle feels wonky. Neither foot looks convincing.

I suggest you head back for anatomical study. Just a mite bit.