I know this is the section for Pivot but Stykz is similar to pivot in some ways so I decided to post here. Anyway this is my first animation using Stykz, all advice will be welcomed.

Decent for a beginner, most definitely. I use Stykz sometimes as well, I honestly think it's better but I like to challenge myself. Try to make easing and constant motions. :)

Hah, I like the narrative thing you got going, you put a whole lot more effort into this than most when they first make these things. Did you do the dialogue yourself?

Thanks! and Yea I was just trying to have some fun with it.

It's damn intuitive is what it is, keep it up