Decided to draw Ryuko cus I was listening to the Kill La Kill Soundtrack
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CnC, comment and stuff

Dope.

I'm pretty sure left hands and right feet aren't supposed to bend that way though.

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Dope.

I'm pretty sure left hands and right feet aren't supposed to bend that way though.

Thanks bro c:
And nah they're probably not
If you don't believe

It's amazing
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It's amazing
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<3 ThanksBro

>Legs are different length
>Broken arms

Drone please.

Head seems too big as well, and you might want to revise that expression, it seems to lack a little.

I like the angling, though.

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>Legs are different length
>Broken arms

Drone please.

Head seems too big as well, and you might want to revise that expression, it seems to lack a little.

I like the angling, though.

I actually didn't notice that I fucked up the leg length .-.
Damnson, I don't know how
and arms can do that, it's just difficult, try it out yourself, it works to some extent
I know the face is off, a lo of people have been saying that to me
thanks for the cnc dude, I'll do better

Oh damn! That checker pattern! Diggin' it Drone.

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Oh damn! That checker pattern! Diggin' it Drone.

got that idea from you dude :>

You are the reason I frequent this section.

One thing I've noticed in many of you digital works drone is a serious lack of line width variation and I think seeing you many of your works are done in high intensity poses or a type of forced perspective it would really push your work to the next level.

I really like the front hand (it gives a serious boost to the slickness of the piece) but because it has both the same *value and the same *line width as the rest of the piece it doesn't "stand out" or come forward and makes the overall composition feel too 2 dimensional and flat.
Try playing around with making the body-parts closer the front use thicker lines, or making the more important areas have thicker lines. I'm pretty certain that by doing this your will your art will become much more dynamic, eye-catching, and over all appealing.

One other thing though that's bothering me is how you used the red accents on the body. It doesn't seem to be suggesting any kind of light source or follow a pattern of some sort, which is making the whole thing feel random. I'm thinking if you re adjusted them to fit some sort of scheme (or a more obvious scheme if you do have one already) then it will bring the drawing together a bit more.

just finished this show and it was awesome XD but anyways this looks amazing :D

Looks pretty good to me... And kill la kill was a great decision to draw

Wow I'm so totally out of my league, hardly understood any of these critiques.

Tho I did understand the head being slightly too big. And the hands begin positioned at weird angles, but I didn't get the broken arms or the legs critiques. I also don't get the thing about her facial expression being too weak.

I really appreciated the critique about the shading and line thickness, looking at it after reading that critique made a lot of sense.

Only real input I have hear is about the hands and the weapon or whatever it is she's dealing with. It doesn't look like she's grabbing it all, so I can only assume it's being held in place by something other than her, and I don't understand what she's doing with it if she's not grabbing or grasping it in some way. I'm guessing it has something to do with the anime it's from that I completely didn't watch.

The checker pattern is a nice touch that on first glance does a good job of hiding all mistakes in the picture, or at least IMO it does.

-SG7 ( :) )