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May 13, 2014 5:30 PM #1194988
I drew this a while ago. the stickman is my RHG, the second... well, i tried to do a selfie but i missed a few features , the third is Zock's human form and the other two are different characters I created.
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May 15, 2014 10:43 PM #1195603
This looks pretty cool. The shading on the "selfie" is pretty boss as well.
My only complaint is the shape of Hector's head. Its kind of too long.
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May 16, 2014 10:29 AM #1195780
Quote from TheKidNinja
This looks pretty cool. The shading on the "selfie" is pretty boss as well.
My only complaint is the shape of Hector's head. Its kind of too long.


HEH HEH Mistake. I like drawing with pens so... couldn't correct the mistake.
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May 16, 2014 3:52 PM #1195894
its not too long its just beavis.
"hehheh we're gonna score..."
i like it too.
Damon kinda seems close to Eren from AoT
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May 16, 2014 7:01 PM #1195931
Everyone is so broken man, all these different styles clashing HECTOR OH GEEZUZ WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU ARE YOU OK
It looks weird to have a stick figure in here. Read Andrew Loomis Fun With A Pencil and his other books, then watch Sycra and Proko videos. They'll help.
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May 21, 2014 4:40 AM #1197586
So, going from left to right, not too bad, but definitely some things I noticed here.

Martin looks pretty good, but his right side is so dilapidated compared to his left: his right eye is smaller, and his left cheek is squeezed in. The hoodie and the shoulders look pretty good, tho I can't speak for correct neck length or not. Also, the letters on the jacket seem to imply he has no chest or that he's hunched forward. If I'm looking at that correctly, that is.

Maytex looks all wrong... or at least he did when I first looked at it. Now I completely forget... oh that's right. His face tilts forward but his hair seems to imply his head is upright. Also, I dare say his eyes are too far apart and his pupils are absent (tho you might have excluded the pupils on purpsoe, IDK). Then again, I'm not quite sure about my critique on Maytex. But again, the hoodie and shoulders look fine to me

Yeah, like everyone says, Hector's head is just... BULLAAAH! Too big. And it looks like his fingers might be broken, tho the sleeve looks okay. The collar around his neck contradicts the side view of his head. The collar says 3/4 but his head says side view

Damon looks fine i can't see anything wrong with him. His sword looks cool.

And what the crap dude you drew all this in pen?! Are you crazy?! (lol jk it's just that I can never get anything done with pen)

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