I practised body anatomy and yeahhh here it is, http://laxus900.deviantart.com/art/Tfsop-Art-455346540 there is eyecatching things that is wrong like the stomache is too long and upper legs might be too wide but anyways waiting for CnC

I'm guessing the left side isn't yours (though I do see mistakes there as well). Either the case, the right one seems to show that you haven't taken much from your practice. Disjointed right shoulder, clavicle that seems to be randomly placed, anatomically impossible figure, balloon thighs, broken ankles, meaningless pose and bad balance amongst other things.

Go back and review your muscle structure, gesture drawing. No clothes.

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I'm guessing the left side isn't yours (though I do see mistakes there as well). Either the case, the right one seems to show that you haven't taken much from your practice. Disjointed right shoulder, clavicle that seems to be randomly placed, anatomically impossible figure, balloon thighs, broken ankles, meaningless pose and bad balance amongst other things.

Go back and review your muscle structure, gesture drawing. No clothes.

ookay thank you ;D