Denizens of The Void

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May 22, 2014 3:48 AM #1197893
http://sylor41.deviantart.com/art/Denizens-of-The-Void-455586785
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May 22, 2014 12:07 PM #1197961
Well that's.. different.

I like it. But there is one thing that sticks out to me. The guys look too crisp and clear to be in the middle of a foggy field surrounded by demons (?) . Like they stand out TOO much with that background.

Now I'm not a photo manipulator, nor do I use any kind of photo editing software, I think all you need to do is make them a little more dull. Maybe go around their edges with a soft blur tool, or whatever you think fits best.
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May 22, 2014 12:29 PM #1197965
I'm not a photo manipulator either, but usually the problem I have with photoshopped images like these are that the people look too "real". Their environment (the smoke and the floor) look unreal, yet the models look very real. I guess make them jive more with the environment, if that makes sense.

Basically: what Chemel said. I think I'm just saying what Chamel is saying, just in a less eloquent manner lmao.
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May 22, 2014 1:55 PM #1197976
Thanks for the critique guys. I agree with you for the most part. I actually had them more blurry before but I changed it back because having the entire picture blurry irks me.
That being said though, I'll mess with it some more later.
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May 23, 2014 6:11 AM #1198199
try looking into different blending techniques, might help
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May 24, 2014 11:31 PM #1198718
Yeah, I am/have now.
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May 25, 2014 1:40 AM #1198742
Posted my Cnc in comments. Under AlternateN.
I don't usually dabble in this realm of art. I know a thing or two that could be fixed with this image.
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May 25, 2014 12:37 PM #1198845
Ohh, that was you? Ok then, thanks.