This is my Crescent Online tryout,
tried to make it as cool as possible,
Enjoy!

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Ffhad3tqbkE

It was alright. I didnt find it really appealing to watch. Probably because it was all really roughly made. Song choice wasnt really my style eighter. Try out something more simple before you go into all these advanced storys of yours. Write them down and make then when you get a little bit better at animation itself!

I don't agree with poppetje3d at all. Respectfully, of course.

You should keep animating the way you animate... stories and all. Just have fun but always try to improve on things to make your overall animation 1. better quality for your viewers 2. easier for you

Cheers

Cnc:

Some of the stuff looks slapped on at the last minute. You could have taken some time to choose a nice clean font for dialogue and/or spend extra time on the background.
The actual animation isn't that bad and it looks good for the zetabrandish style you're going for !
It was enjoyable. I liked the subtle cinematics, try to improve in that area. Don't get lazy ! Don't just throw stuff together last minute... Spend time.

Quote from Xenomaru

I don't agree with poppetje3d at all. Respectfully, of course.

You should keep animating the way you animate... stories and all. Just have fun but always try to improve on things to make your overall animation 1. better quality for your viewers 2. easier for you

Cheers

Cnc:

Some of the stuff looks slapped on at the last minute. You could have taken some time to choose a nice clean font for dialogue and/or spend extra time on the background.
The actual animation isn't that bad and it looks good for the zetabrandish style you're going for !
It was enjoyable. I liked the subtle cinematics, try to improve in that area. Don't get lazy ! Don't just throw stuff together last minute... Spend time.

Thnx for the Advice and your right about the last minute thing, I'll try not to do that next time.