So this is my first upload. I made an account so I thought I should upload something. I only put whoosh sounds in cos I'm kinda lazy :/

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Let me know what you think :D

Pretty good animation but I have to say the whoosh sounds were very obnoxious, it was distracting. The animation would have been better off without them.

Hm, it's just a practice anim rly but thanks for the feedback. I'll be sure to take your advice on board when making my next project :P

Also next time vary the sound effects. Dont reuse the same one and make it a bit quieter.
Heres a download for random sound effects such as whooshes
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?37139-One-Stop-Shop-Sound-FX-Resource-Center-downloadables
Also the animation was good except the blur when the stick attacks was a bit to blurry.

OH! Thx so muxh for the SFX! I couldn't find any good ones so I was just using Smash Bros sounds XD

So basicly what they do, is dodge eachothers attacks? Other than the logic, it all seems pretty fine to me :D

Yup, pretty much. I'm rly bad at coreography so yh... :P

I thought it had pretty interesting choreography really, and its a pretty smooth animation. Your blurs were done well but there were a butt ton of em, just seems like alot of extra work for you. You definitely don't need all of em, a good 1 or 2 would work just fine lol

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So basicly what they do, is dodge eachothers attacks? Other than the logic, it all seems pretty fine to me :D

What's wrong with the logic? That's what a fight is, isn't it? Dodges and blocks until someone gets hit. There ain't nothing wrong with "the logic".
I actually really liked this animation, the choreography in my opinion was pretty good.
One thing I would say you could improve on, is remove some of those blurs, there are a few too many.

Ok so when should I add blurs? Like, just the more powerful hits and stuff like that? I never used to put blurs in, I only recently learnt from Hyun tutorials.

just put em in when you feel like that move should really stand out as strong or something, like if the red guy suddently did a really fast dash, or one of them do some super big kick that you want to really have force or something. you used the blurs really well in all the instances in this anim but there were just too many.