CIVIL WAR: Phase 3: Clones

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Jun 17, 2014 10:37 PM #1208153
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I know, right?
I've never dealt well with word limits. I feel like it stiffles what my mind wants to say.


Haha, ever tried just writing a little bit instead of a massive thing? Not too hard really. Well, write out your piece and see how many words you got. If its too much, get rid of some non-sequential details and boom, word limit won't be awfully hard to reach.
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Jun 18, 2014 1:17 AM #1208198
I have. You can thank my Portuguese teacher that held the writting club until last year in my high-school. An amazing lady. Funily enough, two characters that I'm using were created when she asked us to do a biography of a made-up person in 50 words and are the ones I enjoy writting about the most.

I suppose I got slightly misunderstood. It's not like I don't know how to deal with them, it's just that I don't deal with them well. I was intending to do just that, write out for as long as it must be and then cut down on the non-essential. What I don't like is when I feel like I've cut out all the fat and I still need to get rid of more. I feel like I start wasting good meat.

Another thing I don't like in word limits is the idea that at some point I have to stop. I enjoy when things just flow, and when I know I have a word limit or some kind of restrictment, I feel myself trying to control it, trying to steer it and it never is something pleasant to do.
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Jun 18, 2014 3:59 AM #1208275
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Jun 19, 2014 9:27 PM #1208914
YOU CAN BLOODY WELL THANK TWITCH FOR HELPING ME CUTTING THIS DOWN! >: I

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Jun 19, 2014 9:37 PM #1208917
Thanks for the shout out SJCRPV ;)

After frustration and several reworkings of the plot:

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Jun 20, 2014 1:17 AM #1208963
Here it is, Saul. Exactly 300 words.

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Jun 21, 2014 4:13 PM #1209576
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Jun 22, 2014 3:37 AM #1209789
Well, might as well, show my PM-ed work.
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Jun 22, 2014 11:44 AM #1209888
Well here goes nothing for here is my entry.
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Jun 22, 2014 7:06 PM #1210017
Heh, I find it interesting how different all of our reasons to be upset are!

Aiba: Issues at the clan home
Sirius: Lost Flash-bangs/Citizen, not ruler
Hollywood: Kid brother hurt
Sebastian: Hiding his True Objective/"Overreacting"
Sabine: Re-evaluation/Black Hand ambush
Suicide Sisters: Noisy Neighbor
Bl.An.C.: Illusion of control
L.L.: Denied cigarettes/Can't light others
Lucario: Tripped/Rustiness due to lack of battles
Larry: Abrupt awakening during good dream/Tripping/Beer is far away

Unrelatedly, something else I noticed:

Names:
A:1 (10%)
B:1 (10%)
H:1 (10%)
S:4 (40%)
L:3 (30%)

Clans Represented:
A New Journey: 2 (20%)
Lucario, L.L.
ActaSanctorum: 2 (20%)
Sebastian, Sabine
Observer Protocol: 1 (10%)
Bl.An.C.
The Wind Chasers- Rebels of Peace: 1 (10%)
Aiba
Independent: 4 (40%)
Sirius, Hollywood, Larry, Suicide Sisters
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Jun 22, 2014 7:52 PM #1210027
Well Larry or Sonicus-Burpacus can be considered an S or an L
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Jun 23, 2014 12:10 AM #1210082
Quote from Crank
Heh, I find it interesting how different all of our reasons to be upset are!

Aiba: Issues at the clan home
Sirius: Lost Flash-bangs/Citizen, not ruler
Hollywood: Kid brother hurt
Sebastian: Hiding his True Objective/"Overreacting"
Sabine: Re-evaluation/Black Hand ambush
Bl.An.C: Illusion of control
L.L.: Denied cigarettes
Lucario: Internal Clashing/Fell out of bed
Larry: Abrupt awakening during good dream/Tripping/Beer is far away

Unrelatedly, something else I noticed:

Names:
A:1 (11%)
B:1 (11%)
H:1 (11%)
S:3 (33%)
L:3 (33%)

Clans Represented:
A New Journey: 2 (22%)
ActaSanctorum: 2 (22%)
Observer Protocol: 1 (11%)
The Wind Chasers- Rebels of Peace: 1 (11%)
Independent: 3 (33%)

Actually, the reason Luke is pissed because he tripped and his rustiness due to lack of battles.
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Jun 23, 2014 1:28 AM #1210115
L.L is pissed because of being denied cigs and because he can't find any way to light the ones he has now. Hahaha, and I wanna join a clan, anyone want me? XD
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Jun 23, 2014 1:44 AM #1210120
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L.L is pissed because of being denied cigs and because he can't find any way to light the ones he has now. Hahaha, and I wanna join a clan, anyone want me? XD

*raises hand*
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Jun 23, 2014 1:46 AM #1210123
Aww! If only school haven't start yet! Otherwise I could've joined...;~;