I'm finally done with my exams, so I have time for animating again. Here is the result:
http://www.filz.us/view/e1966a2e-ad3/
Practice, again...
Started by: -Spyder- | Replies: 4 | Views: 519
Jun 14, 2014 10:35 PM #1206849
Jun 14, 2014 10:58 PM #1206858
the blue (wind blast?) thingy didn't really appear to have that much force, but otherwise, the anim was pretty slick.
Jun 15, 2014 2:50 AM #1206970
I really like your style and stick construction. That being said your last attack (the green blast?) was lacking in any follow through or force. He just puts his arms up and puts them back down again. Other than that great job.
Jun 15, 2014 7:10 AM #1207075
Hey there, nice to see an animation from you again.
This one is really quite nice, the movements are fluid and smooth.
A couple of things I see are, when the green guy grabs the brown guy, the movement that his leg makes kinda confuses me, I'm not quite sure what it is, but it looks a little odd in my opinion. The second thing I could see was when the green guy shot the blue blast thing, the brown guy hit his head and recoiled really fast, I think you should slow that bit down. The final thing I saw, was when the green guy shot the green orb thing, the brown guy slumps to the floor, which looks pretty good, but he slumps a bit too fast, I think he should "slump" a bit slower.
This one is really quite nice, the movements are fluid and smooth.
A couple of things I see are, when the green guy grabs the brown guy, the movement that his leg makes kinda confuses me, I'm not quite sure what it is, but it looks a little odd in my opinion. The second thing I could see was when the green guy shot the blue blast thing, the brown guy hit his head and recoiled really fast, I think you should slow that bit down. The final thing I saw, was when the green guy shot the green orb thing, the brown guy slumps to the floor, which looks pretty good, but he slumps a bit too fast, I think he should "slump" a bit slower.
Jun 15, 2014 4:34 PM #1207207
Thanks guys! I absolutely agree with these things you said. I didn't do anything for 3 months, so I'm a bit rusty, but I'll watch out for these problems next time.