http://g0mute.deviantart.com/art/RHG-demo-style-practice-462117176

CnC appreciated. (i'll add sounds and blood later)

I think the main 2 problems are that near the end, the sword guy's movements look a little awkward and maybe a little wobbily, and all of the sticks backs were bent the whoooole time. Made them look stiff in that way and that they had the ol' scoliosis ya pickin up what im puttin down?? mm hm yah so work on that

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I think the main 2 problems are that near the end, the sword guy's movements look a little awkward and maybe a little wobbily, and all of the sticks backs were bent the whoooole time. Made them look stiff in that way and that they had the ol' scoliosis ya pickin up what im puttin down?? mm hm yah so work on that

mkay, i see what you mean by the stiff backs, but i think that may be just how i animate, but I'll try to fix that. Thanks amf