This is my first Drawing in This style.
I hope you like it :).
http://mgamerpro.deviantart.com/art/My-First-Anime-Drawing-O-462269414

Why are you trying Anime when you have no idea what you are doing. Stick with basic shapes, the basic of the basic. Lines, work on making smoother lines because these are shaky as fuck. Circles/oval, every head starts with a circle, but it won't end with one, if you can't draw a simple circle you have no place drawing stylized eastern style. Heads don't turn that angle, it looks like she snapped her neck, I wouldn't blame her. What ever this is this isn't "Anime", the more accurate term you are looking for and should be using is Eastern Inspired, what anime have you ever seen that looks like this. Start off drawing from life I would recommend but if you can't read Andrew Loomis' Fun With A Pencil book, do the exercises then move to reference drawing. Don't forget gesture drawing. If you don't know what I'm talking about there's a neat thing called Google that magically finds things for you look up these key words

Andrew Loomis books
Youtube Sycra
Youtube Proko
Gesture Drawing
Human References

Ditch Eastern Inspired art for now, come back, if you even want to.

Quote from mizu

Why are you trying Anime when you have no idea what you are doing. Stick with basic shapes, the basic of the basic. Lines, work on making smoother lines because these are shaky as fuck. Circles/oval, every head starts with a circle, but it won't end with one, if you can't draw a simple circle you have no place drawing stylized eastern style. Heads don't turn that angle, it looks like she snapped her neck, I wouldn't blame her. What ever this is this isn't "Anime", the more accurate term you are looking for and should be using is Eastern Inspired, what anime have you ever seen that looks like this. Start off drawing from life I would recommend but if you can't read Andrew Loomis' Fun With A Pencil book, do the exercises then move to reference drawing. Don't forget gesture drawing. If you don't know what I'm talking about there's a neat thing called Google that magically finds things for you look up these key words

Andrew Loomis books
Youtube Sycra
Youtube Proko
Gesture Drawing
Human References

Ditch Eastern Inspired art for now, come back, if you even want to.

Thank you For the comment And ideas.Ill use your feedback in my other drawings!