Here it is

http://antiup.net/view/9620/

Have I improved?...ha have I??:Smile:

Hey any one pleas C&C on my anim!!!
I got 23 views but no replies!!!!!!!!!!
paleez C&C

it´s ok but really choppy, work on smoothness

Ok thanks!
I think I need to put in more frames?

Pretty good. You got to work on the heads of the characters, they should be more round. Work on your trails, I don't know why, but they seem a bit too big to me. Try to make them smaller and at a lower alpha, the motion is too slow for such big trails. Also work on wobbliness and reactions.

Overall it was good. It had good movement and decent reactions of those who were hit. I'd say you're medium beginner.

Oh thanks a lot!
Now I Know where I am weak
and I gotta rectify those weakness
thanks again!


I didn't understand what you told about trials...were you talking about tests
or sort of?

hmm it was pretty stiff dude.. and you need to work on easing...

ok dude lol it looks like his foot is a lightsaber. as in 1. why would the second guy run in and jump at his foot, then the foot barely touches him nd he flies back

Add more frames and be more patient for the start spend one hour animating 3 seconds long walk loop.

That's what I don't have...PATIENCE!
I need to work on it....
Thanks to your replies

Quote from guitarhero1236

ok dude lol it looks like his foot is a lightsaber.

i gots an idea...