Well I did this, it's not very good cause I wasn't focused when I done it...Tell me how to improve please

It's not very good I just tried this.



Thnks!

I like the roll. But your walk is not so good, too fast.

He should crouch down more when starting the roll and tuck his legs in more during the roll. Other than that, the roll is really well done and surprisingly smooth.

The walk feels rushed. The speed is inconsistent and too fast. Either slow down the walk, or turn it into a run with slower, larger leg movements and more upper body movement. The movement of the legs look good, though.

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He should crouch down more when starting the roll and tuck his legs in more during the roll. Other than that, the roll is really well done and surprisingly smooth.

The walk feels rushed. The speed is inconsistent and too fast. Either slow down the walk, or turn it into a run with slower, larger leg movements and more upper body movement. The movement of the legs look good, though.

Well thank you, And yes I didn't do very well on this. I can see that. But thank you.