Please leave feedback. I am a beginner so please judge me as one. This is a test for effects and dramatic entrances. I will work on more like this later on and fix them using any criticism I get. Thanks. :D
http://www.fastswf.com/T_Wgrg4

I like that you use more colours, but try while animating to imagine what comes next, like how fast, and which direction will the smoke go if my guy hits the ground this hard, or how much time would my character need to do this or that movement, is he going left or right, should this arm minimize or flail this way, blah blah, hope I'm understandable :)