It is very short and choppy!

Needs Improvment.:Nooooooo:

that was extremely pointless and stupid. it was beyond short, it was microscopic. make it longer, put fourth more effort, and for jesus sake don't make the sounds yourself.

way to short. and yes it was quite choppy

I wish you could vote to remove things... This would me number one!

Okay I gave it 1 because it sucks more than a freakin' tornado!

don't care what anyone says me25 it's tom you don't know me but I have to admit it was pretty short you should do it longer all my freinds at school love stickpageportal well good luck making your next movie!